lj just ate my comment so here is a different one.
i thought you did amazing with how you wrote this and it was just so pretty and lovely all over, despite it being sad but the angst warning is what drew me in. the whole thought of heechul leaving hankyung like that isn't that hard to wrap my mind around since i get bored of people too but still, it's kind of heartbreaking. and how hankyung picked up all his stuff up and still, he couldn't take it all back. sugjkdhgffd. stealing for my mems, much?
alkdjfas i love you! mems are with out a doubt my favorite. i get bored of things like this too! probably not the best thing, but it is what it is. angst always draws people in haha
beautifully written angst jessica ♥ should've. gah T-T the scene with hankyung picking up all his things, genuis. i really felt for the poor guy. you write so well bb~ :)
really ouch on Hannie's side, but then I love angst, so...hehe. This was really beautiful esp the words you chose to describe Hannie's feelings, how he just couldnt help staying close to Heechul despite knowing that he would get hurt eventually, in the end; and it kinda really hit somewhere close to home. You know I love this don't you? :D
this is probably my worst fear with hanchul ;____; it's kind of like when you think someone's out of your league and are constantly worrying that they'll leave you and then they do ;__________; heechullllll
haha it actually stemmed from my feeling about writing, because i couldn't, but i wanted to, but i didn't know how to fix the slump i was in, so i just...stopped haha
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Nicely written, though. :)
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ilu :D
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i thought you did amazing with how you wrote this and it was just so pretty and lovely all over, despite it being sad but the angst warning is what drew me in. the whole thought of heechul leaving hankyung like that isn't that hard to wrap my mind around since i get bored of people too but still, it's kind of heartbreaking. and how hankyung picked up all his stuff up and still, he couldn't take it all back. sugjkdhgffd. stealing for my mems, much?
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alkdjfas i love you! mems are with out a doubt my favorite. i get bored of things like this too! probably not the best thing, but it is what it is. angst always draws people in haha
thank you so much reading! and memming! ♥
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should've. gah T-T
the scene with hankyung picking up all his things, genuis.
i really felt for the poor guy. you write so well bb~
:)
can't wait for your HP verse
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im so awful to him, i really am.
ilu
shhh ahah ;D
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This was really beautiful esp the words you chose to describe Hannie's feelings, how he just couldnt help staying close to Heechul despite knowing that he would get hurt eventually, in the end; and it kinda really hit somewhere close to home.
You know I love this don't you? :D
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ahh i love when comments really look into my fics, thank you :)
<333
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this is probably my worst fear with hanchul ;____;
it's kind of like when you think someone's out of your league and are constantly worrying that they'll leave you
and then they do
;__________; heechullllll
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lol that's awesome though. best extended metaphor ever.
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