Razorblade Apprentice

Aug 20, 2008 07:38

Title: Razorblade Apprentice
Author: hollow_strife
Beta Credit: torncorpse
Characters: Riku and Demyx
Word Count: 2,098
Rating: PG-13
Summary: This was it. He was finally going to let the darkness that ate at him win. He was finally going to give and become an empty shell of the person he once been.
Disclaimer: This is a total and complete work of fiction. I in no ( Read more... )

kingdom hearts, demyx, fan fiction, riku

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x_cybergoth_x August 20 2008, 13:00:48 UTC
I liked this a lot. I like pieces where people look into emotions, inner turmoil. They are far more real to me than the usual vapid fanfics out there. This felt solid, well formed, made me feel in return. That to me is a good fic, so well done hon!

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hollow_strife August 21 2008, 06:05:34 UTC
Aw thank you sweetie! I do try, very hard, to look into emotions and to make it seem more real and solid as you said, so I'm glad I did a good job! Thank you once again!

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x_cybergoth_x August 21 2008, 06:07:17 UTC
you are welcome. I am bracing myself for upset in my next update. A whole chapter of Hojo doing what he does best... *shudders*

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hollow_strife August 21 2008, 06:15:13 UTC
ah no worries, I was afraid people were going to think I had lost my shit. I mean, with Riku having people talking in his head and then seeing one of them. Yeah....

Hojo..... *shudders with you*

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darkenglishrose August 20 2008, 13:02:37 UTC
<3

That was beautiful! So touching!

and yes, damnit, I WANT TO LIIIIVE.
...I mean, uh, Demyx needs to be alive...*cough*

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hollow_strife August 21 2008, 06:07:10 UTC
I still sound like I've lost my shit, but anyway...

thank you hon! And in the next one I pro,ise that you will be ALIVE!

I mean *Coughs* Demyx will be alive. Excuse my mistake, I'm not well you know.

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mako_pretty August 20 2008, 14:14:21 UTC
I liked this a lot! Good feel, strong emotions, just wonderful sweetie!

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hollow_strife August 21 2008, 06:07:48 UTC
Thank you sweetie pie! I'm glad that you liked it!

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torncorpse August 20 2008, 16:41:30 UTC
you know i love it. really. i mean, duh.

^_^
maybe with your new plushies there will be some not so angst ridden plot bunnies?
or are we sticking with the angst ridden plot bunnies?

lol.
^_^

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hollow_strife August 21 2008, 06:10:51 UTC
I know sweetie. Since your my beta I always know opinions first! :)

No I need to write something and fluffy where Demyx actually lives, or is alive in it before Shini decides to kill me. So yes, now that I have them I'm sure that we're have some nicer, happier stories!

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