Razorblade Apprentice

[hollow_strife]

Title: Razorblade Apprentice
Author: hollow_strife
Beta Credit: torncorpse
Characters: Riku and Demyx
Word Count: 2,098
Rating: PG-13
Summary: This was it. He was finally going to let the darkness that ate at him win. He was finally going to give and become an empty shell of the person he once been.
Disclaimer: This is a total and complete work of fiction. I in no

Comments

[x_cybergoth_x]

I liked this a lot. I like pieces where people look into emotions, inner turmoil. They are far more real to me than the usual vapid fanfics out there. This felt solid, well formed, made me feel in return. That to me is a good fic, so well done hon!

[hollow_strife]

Aw thank you sweetie! I do try, very hard, to look into emotions and to make it seem more real and solid as you said, so I'm glad I did a good job! Thank you once again!

[x_cybergoth_x]

you are welcome. I am bracing myself for upset in my next update. A whole chapter of Hojo doing what he does best... *shudders*

[hollow_strife]

ah no worries, I was afraid people were going to think I had lost my shit. I mean, with Riku having people talking in his head and then seeing one of them. Yeah....

Hojo..... *shudders with you*

[x_cybergoth_x]

yup, nastiest thing I have ever written. Written during two days of hormonal angst...

[hollow_strife]

you know the best time to write angst is when your ansgting yourself? Most of my best stuff comes out when I'm tired or sick. It's so weird.

[x_cybergoth_x]

yup, I find the same I really do. Though when i nearly squick my beta... and she is an extremely tough lady... then I know I have gone dark!

[hollow_strife]

I've never done that before. I have had her tell me to put down the stalkers guide book I had appartently been reading, but otherwise I've never written anything quite that bad!

[x_cybergoth_x]

This is nasty. The worrying thing is that I could do worse, I have an extremely active imagination when it comes to pain and torture. I am tempted to write a fic all about Hojo's work in canon FFVII, but no-one would read it unless they have a constitution of iron...

[hollow_strife]

Uh yeah, don't get upset if I don't read this right now okay? My stomach is upset already *Points to it* and while I have no why, I'm not about to make it any worse.

Maybe I'm having smpathy sickness for you my dear.

[x_cybergoth_x]

The nasty ain't up yet anyway, leaving it a day or two. I wouldn't blame you if you don't read it at all. I will post it with a stonking warning on it either tomorrow or Saturday.

And if you are feeling sick in sympathy I am so damned sorry! Its not fun I know!!!

[hollow_strife]

Oh I'm sure that's not it, I was just messing with you hon. It's just weird that I'm sick at the same time. And instead of blaming Vexen (He's my person to blame stuff on this week) I blamed in on the goth baby of doom! :)

[x_cybergoth_x]

hehe, baby of doom alright. Quite chuffed, baby of doom has let mummy not feel sick for two days straight. Semms to have decided to like mummy.

[hollow_strife]

Aw1 Maybe it's decided to calm down and realize that it has to get on it's mommie's goodside?

I feel so awkward calling the baby an it. And that sounded offensive as well. told you I was at this whole kid thing.

[x_cybergoth_x]

hon, I took no offense, we have no idea what sex baby is, and have no intention to know till baby is born. hence I have taken to calling my unborn cyberbaby as 'it' does indeed feel awkward, but I will take no offence at anyone else doing so.

But yes, cyberbaby better get on mummy's good side, or cyberbaby might find themselves grounded till they are 20...

[hollow_strife]

Good. I hate offended people over their children. Like the ones who braid their kids hair and dress them so it impossible to tell weather its a boy or a girl so you have no choice but to either call it or one or the other and maybe offend the parent.

Your not going to find out the sex? I think I would have to, so I could decorate the room and have everything all ready and perfect, but I'm just like that.