Creation to Future Chapter 6

[holleyb76]

Welcome back to chapter six of my Creation to Future challenge story based off of JoandSarah's Creation to Future Challenge.
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As a warning that this chapter contains some mild language, adult themes and nudity.

Since this started as a challenge story I decided to bring you up to

Comments

[joandsarah]

Great chapter Holley :D But not long enough! I want to know what happens next! Love the dress shop me and karima are running. :D

[holleyb76]

LOL! Yeah I thought you should finally be in the story since it is your challenge.
Glad you liked it. Thanks for reading it.

[tinag13]

Wow, awesome chapter Holley! I'm very impressed and I loved it! You're welcome for the pic editing, even though you didn't use that one pic I worked into the wee hours of night, opened up simpe, used sim surgery, replaced windows, parts of floors, and wallpaper to get for you. lol That'll teach me to not work so hard next time...lol

Uh, I think you need to hire a new proof reader. You over and over again used the word 'meet', when you meant 'met'. Also, a black cloud would 'fall' over him, not 'feel'. ;) lol

But.... awesome chapter, I have to say again! Now the pressure is on to give us more! :D

[holleyb76]

Yeah, sorry about the picture, but I think it turned out better story wise with both. Hopefully that doesn't turn you off to helping me again.
Glad you liked the chapter. That's high praise that you were impressed. I was particularly proud of this chapter... Cliff Hanger and All!
I'll go back and recheck those meet/met. To be fair, my proof reader caught A LOT of stuff so I'm not so upset she missed a few things.

[aussie_karima]

WOW! I seem to be saying that a lot laterly, but this is you best so far, & what a cliff hanger! :)
I loved it all so much that I will have trouble waiting for more,so get to it girl! :)
Thank you, for sharing..........I will read you later! :)

[holleyb76]

Thanks Karima! I am glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading it.

I actually have a lot of pictures for the next chapter already taken. I do want to get at it soon, but my DH and kids kind of miss me :) I was on the computer ALL DAY Sunday writing this so I might have to wait a little bit to get started again.

[jillyson]

I think this was the best chapter yet! For someone who once said they didn't know how to write a story, you're sure a quick learner! Lol!

Sorry I missed those misspells for you! I think I must've been so caught up in the awesome tasty goodness of your story and just missed the details! I'll do better for you next time, I promise!

What a cliffhanger! Now I'm going to have to nag you for the next chapter! Hurry hurry hurry!!!

[holleyb76]

It's OK Jill. I'm really not worried about those few you missed. I'm just glad I had someone to look it over for me, seeing how my DH hates to.
Thanks again and I'm glad you liked it.

[gldkelly]

Great ending to this chapter Holley!! The tears on Meadows face are awesome!I wonder if Meadow is going to figure out who the man wolf really is?

You did a great job on that Build!!It looks great!!!

I see your working overtime in photobucket, so I'm guessing a next chapter is coming out soon!! It better be!! LOL!

Great chapter, but I agree, it was TO SHORT!!! Must have MORE!!!!! Giggle!!

[holleyb76]

Thanks Lynda!
Yeah, the building required for this chapter. The Tavern, Jo and Karima's shop and the new Creation main house took awhile, but I LOVE how they turned out.
I kind of wish I could stay in this Medieval time, but alas I got to finish the challenge build me a space ship!