Creation to Future Chapter 6

[holleyb76]

Welcome back to chapter six of my Creation to Future challenge story based off of JoandSarah's Creation to Future Challenge.
Rules can be found here:
desirablediscourses.proboards.com/index.cgi

As a warning that this chapter contains some mild language, adult themes and nudity.

Since this started as a challenge story I decided to bring you up to

Comments

[amylu1988]

:D Loved the chapter Holley, the medieval theme really suits the family, and has added loads to it like the houses, businesses, etc.

The scenes with Meadow and Caine were really touching, I hope it all turns out okay for them! Nice tear effects on Meadow at the end too, they worked perfectly.

I recognised Enid and Cordelia from the meadow in an earlier chapter when Adam was wandering around, was it before Ivah was born or Seth perhaps? I'm not too sure, but I did recognise them from that I think.

I can't wait for more, and argh at the cliffhanger! :) I want to know what's next!

[holleyb76]

Thanks for reading Amylu.
Is that what everyone calss you? I'm sorry I can't remember.

I really do like this medieval part of the challenge. There is a lot of cool CC and the building has been fun.
I have a thread on DD with a bunch of picspam from the neighborhood if your interested, here:
http://desirablediscourses.proboards.com/index.cgi?board=pictures&action=display&thread=1442&page=1

Enid and Cordelia are just the witches that came with Apartment Life. I don't think I have showed them ion previous chapters.
Since Tristan is a Warlock, I thought I'd use the witches in the neighborhood in my story.

Again, thanks for reading and for your comment.

[holleyb76]

I just realized what you were saying.
The scene in chapter two when Adam goes to Peerless park does have a witch in it, but I don't think it was Cordelia or Enid, which are not their names in the game by the way :)
It was another Good Witch and the Nature girl Naanen, or something.

[fuzzy_spork]

Whew, found some time to read this finally... Dang, this challenge really flies through time. Love the shop. lol And the medieval CC is really cool. I see this and want to try to build a historical neighborhood in my own game. :P

Wow, this was awesome, Holley! :D I'm loving the supernatural elements you've worked in the plot. Way interesting. BTW: Tristan + Ivah = *squee* <3

Ack, that's one heckuva cliffhanger. O_O Can't wait to see what's next. :) (Thanks for letting me know you had posted this! I was really looking forward to it!)

[holleyb76]

I am glad you like Tristan and Ivah! No one has mentioned Tristan yet. I guess I changed his looks enough that they don't recognize him. I was sure Jo would mention it. Oh Well.

Thanks for reading it Fuzzy! Yeah, that cliff hanger was well planned. I swore everyone would be yelling at me because of it.

Hope to get the next one out soon, but you know how that goes.

[fuzzy_spork]

Hah, actually it took me a second to realize who it was, even KNOWING you were using him. ;D Amazing what some facial hair will do. It might have been a dead give-away if the first shot was of him smiling and finger-gunning. Heh.

Yeah I know how that goes. I'm actually in the middle of fixing my computer (yet again), and I can't even remember the last time I played Sims! D:

[joandsarah]

I didn't mention who Tristan was in case I was wrong lol.

[holleyb76]

LOL! I just noticed I TOTALLY messed up and no one caught it.
The picture when Caine takes Eve and Ivah back down should be during the day :)
Oh Well!

[joandsarah]

Should it? But the photos just before are dimmish looking too, and it's not a sudden light then dark then light, so it blends in. I guess now that you point it out ;) He did go there for breakfast.

[holleyb76]

The pictures BEFORE are inside, so they would be not so bright. The pictures after I SAY it's evening. The picture, in the time line of the story, should be taken about 12-1 PM or so.
I'll fix it later.

[valpre1983]

No no no! A cliff hanger? Cain can't be dead! No! *sniffs* and *cries*

Okay, now that I'm slightly over that cliff hanger I must say this was an awesome chapter. I liked the way you've blended the creation family with the other guys's simselves and how you've made their lives run concurrently with each others.

I was a bit confused with Tristan's story line and I had to go back to the start of the chapter to make sure I was still reading CtoF. But you tied it in nicely with Ivah's storyline and it made more sense. Do I sense a love connection between Ivah and Tristan? Wow, imagine what a powerful couple they would make.

It's like Tina said, now you're under pressure to release chapter seven soon soon. If I could give you 5 fat stars here I would. I loved your pictures in this chapter also.

[holleyb76]

Thank Val!
Sorry about the cliff hanger...NOT!!!

Introducing a new character can be hard in the middle, but I'm glad to hear I did it well :)

[collidingwithme]

OMG NUUUU!!! Don't die, Caine, Meadow needs you! D8

It's a little disturbing that Ivah already fell in love with Tristan just by seeing him in her mind. :P I'd be creeped out if I were Tristan. I wonder what he saw when he was reading her mind though. Did he see that he was going to have a future with Ivah? Gosh, things are getting exciting now! :D Great chapter!

[holleyb76]

Your right, it is a bit creepy :) I guess you could say she loves the idea of him rigt now. Obviously they need to get to know each other better.

Thanks for reading my story. I hope to have the next chapter out by the end of the year.