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hmd_meme

Concrit Post 14

Feb 12, 2010 12:53

How's My Driving?

∞ Comment with all the journals you RP with (and the communities they're from).
∞ Reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism
∞ Learn from the suggestions and profit!

► Play nice! Flaming will not be tolerated, and threads with such will be deleted. Save the wank for anonmemearchive/roleplaysecrets► IP addresses are not ( Read more... )

!concrit

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sauceytomato February 12 2010, 17:56:09 UTC

sauceytomato February 13 2010, 00:31:47 UTC

I really like playing with you, but I do have a constructive crit. Take it as you will.

You use WAY too many tags.

An example of this: http://sauceytomato.livejournal.com/24337.html

You have more tags than actual words in your post. PLEASE consider using less?

hoshi3 February 13 2010, 00:39:14 UTC

About half of those in that particular post are contact tags, but yeah, I do know what you mean. I've been working on it, I'd like to think, and really create only 1-5 new tags, if at all.

But thanks for bringing it up regardless, anon! :)

nendo_chan February 13 2010, 01:33:55 UTC

SAUUUUCE. Seriously, you and Hitsu both have made me love characters I disliked from pretty much their first appearances.

Thread 7

cesia February 12 2010, 17:56:44 UTC

@ campfuckudie
Aizawa Kouichi | (Nabari no Ou) immortowl
Schuldig | (Weiss Kreuz) youschuldblame
Rath Illuser | (Dragon Knights) killerofademon
Amasawa Chitose | (The Weatherman is My Lover) weatherfairy
Jo Carpenter | (Bakuretsu Tenshi) tsungunfire
Cyborg #18 | (Dragon Ball Z) pwntryinmotion
Eclipse | (Demon Diary) demonesticate
Shigeka Narushige | (Silver Diamond) koudependent
Ash | (The Tarot Café) odiousialist

@

( ... )

inquisitorial February 12 2010, 18:17:28 UTC

We should play more

weatherfairy February 18 2010, 10:52:22 UTC

We really should! ♥

cesia February 12 2010, 20:31:43 UTC

I think you're a nice person but I noticed that you have a tenancy to try and focus conversations in irc chat to yourself a lot.

Thread 20

andvainglorious February 12 2010, 17:57:05 UTC

@discedo
The Master | Doctor Who | andvainglorious

I also play him at Somarium, but my activity there has been appalling, so I'll be trying to get that back on track this weekend. However, if you have anything to say relating to Somarium specifically that isn't activity (because believe me, I am more than aware of that issue), feel free to say!

--Oh. Watch me edit this a million and one times. I'm really new to playing him, so um. I really would appreciate anything.

Dropped: Both were played at discedo and I may pick them back up elsewhere in the future, so, have at it!
Tomoo Manaka/Ryou Naruse | Maou | angelic-lawyer
Xerxes Break | Pandora Hearts | allmoveone

perfectrecord February 12 2010, 17:57:11 UTC

At damned:

Manfred von Karma (Ace Attorney): perfectrecord (he also has an anon-enabled and IP-logging disabled HMD post at the top of his journal)

Homeless/fountainofcod/dear_mun/various IC memes/etc.:

Mike Meekins (Ace Attorney): dork_at_duty
The Judge (Ace Attorney): judgey_udgey
Lucca (Chrono Trigger): guns_n_glasses
Tasslehoff Burrfoot (Dragonlance): not_a_cutpurse

And others you know I play or have played in the past. I also have an all-purpose HMD post here; anon is enabled, IP logging is disabled, and all comments are screened by default.

I welcome crit on everything, especially ICness and writing style.

I am painfully aware that activity is my biggest downfall, followed by confidence, and have been trying to work on those. Also, I've been trying to work on cleaning up my writing thanks to the suggestions from the game-wide HMD meme a couple of months ago. (How has that been working out since then? Am I on the right track or barking up the wrong tree?)

Thanks in advance. ^^

samekh February 12 2010, 17:57:21 UTC