Concrit Post 14

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

∞ Comment with all the journals you RP with (and the communities they're from).
∞ Reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism
∞ Learn from the suggestions and profit!

► Play nice! Flaming will not be tolerated, and threads with such will be deleted. Save the wank for anonmemearchive/roleplaysecrets► IP addresses are not

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[lavaliere]

AMATOMNES» Rolo Lamperouge | Code Geass | ⇨ fakingtime
» Gaap | Umineko no Naku Koro ni | ⇨ devilishpretty
OTHER» Muse list ⇨ here
Hit me hard! I'm ready for anything, please. OOC crit, characterization, writing style... anything! Don't hold back! ♥

[endlessmagic]

I can only comment on Gaap, but I really love what I've seen of her so far♥ Threading with you is always a lot of fun.

[pretending]

ty, bb! ♥ I hope I can continue to please.

[demyx]

I really envy how you can get Rolo out there and get him some nice CR, but still keep him believable. His voice is fantastic. ♥ And this is kinda on the shallow side but I really like the "layout" of his posts, with the textboxes and all. It's the little things that make him fun to read. x3

Aaaand echoing kt, your Gaap is spot on and fantastic. ♥ I'm so glad you joined the cast *A*

[hypernovae]

ABSOLUTE THRESHOLD.
hypernovae » superboy » dc comics
delives » senji kiyomasa » deadman wonderland
egotic » adachi tohru » persona 4

OTHERS.
❝ muse list❞

[red_dust_rising]

At thewake_rp:
Derek Rayne [red_dust_rising] - OC

At betenoire_rp:
Everett Young [thewrongsoldier] - Stargate: Universe
Benjamin/Delta [spinofthewheel] - Dollhouse (OC)

[misstakin]

@discedo
Azula || Avatar: The Last Airbender || bends-lightning
Eli Bradley || Young Avengers || notquitecap
Kurogane || Tsubasa: Reservoir Chronicle || mages-game
Shuichi || Gravitation || constantidiot

@xi-rpg
Maxxie Oliver || Skins || feltnothing

And any you might recognize here.

[marypoopins]

@ campfuckudie and gargleblasted

Kagura | Gintama | marypoopins

thread logging

[marypoopins]

I sort of kind of stalk your Kagura at gargleblasted and you really are amazing. Keep up the good work.

sfjknsj sorry I have no crit.

[marypoopins]

Aaaah, thank you, anon! I really wasn't expecting anything from people following me at gargleblasted since I'm not that active. But you make me determined to play more. I hope I continue not to disappoint. o7

[marypoopins]

FIGHT ON KAGURA.