Concrit Post 14

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

∞ Comment with all the journals you RP with (and the communities they're from).
∞ Reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism
∞ Learn from the suggestions and profit!

► Play nice! Flaming will not be tolerated, and threads with such will be deleted. Save the wank for anonmemearchive/roleplaysecrets► IP addresses are not

Comments

[cesia]

@ campfuckudie
Aizawa Kouichi | (Nabari no Ou) immortowl
Schuldig | (Weiss Kreuz) youschuldblame
Rath Illuser | (Dragon Knights) killerofademon
Amasawa Chitose | (The Weatherman is My Lover) weatherfairy
Jo Carpenter | (Bakuretsu Tenshi) tsungunfire
Cyborg #18 | (Dragon Ball Z) pwntryinmotion
Eclipse | (Demon Diary) demonesticate
Shigeka Narushige | (Silver Diamond) koudependent
Ash | (The Tarot Café) odiousialist

@
campaudie
Amasawa Chitose | (The Weatherman is My Lover)
weatherfairy

@ stedelweiss
Kanda Yuu | (D.Gray-man) lotusofsteel

@ xi_rpg [AU]
Kanda Yuu | (D.Gray-man) lotusofsteel

@ discedo
Amasawa Chitose | (The Weatherman is My Lover) weathersmile

[inquisitorial]

We should play more

[weatherfairy]

We really should! ♥

[cesia]

I think you're a nice person but I noticed that you have a tenancy to try and focus conversations in irc chat to yourself a lot.

[cesia]

do you understand the point of a hmd post

[cesia]

Im sorry for this not being a critique or praise on characterization. Their characters are okay but to steer topics to themselves oocly makes me view them as self-centered and less inclined to comment to them icly. The impression I get is Play with me because my character is awesome and you should.

[cesia]

SO I GUESS I SHOULD ALSO STOP STEERING TOPICS TO MYSELF. BUT I LOVE MYSELF. WHY CAN OTHER PEOPLE NOT LOVE ME TOO?

[autovajin]

Well damn I meant to be logged in. But, like, I should also mention that I am awesome. & that you should play with me.

[autovajin]

Also, you should praise me. Because I am the shit.

[autovajin]

I am also the coolest kid on the block.

[autovajin]

Why are you not replying to me? DON'T YOU LOVE ME?

[autovajin]

I NEED THE VALIDATION.

[autovajin]

Maybe you should also bow & go ONEGAI TO BE LETTING ME PLAY WITH YOU BECAUSE YOU ARE SO COOL & I AM LIKE NOTHING COMPARED TO YOUR GREATNESS.

[autovajin]

Oh, you are no fun at all. I am already bored of this. GOODBYE FOREVER.

[cesia]

I don't know you from Joe Doe but that made me lol.

[autovajin]

i am a giant troll, that is all.