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hmd_meme

Concrit Post 3

Jan 09, 2009 19:34

How's My Driving?

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ration January 10 2009, 00:51:26 UTC

orzzzz

@Discedo

Reno//Final Fantasy VII//nomakothx
Raiden//Metal Gear Solid//lightningreborn
Tomokai Yoshida//Brodie's Law//tomoyoshida

I need to tag moar and get everyone but Reno more active; this I know. I just haven't had much drive lately, not that it makes up for it.

ration January 10 2009, 03:09:34 UTC

I'm not entirely caught up on your Raiden's history but I must say, you are one of the few Raiden RPers I really like. Your portrayal of him shows you pay attention to the little details that many people tend to miss. Raiden, in any incarnation, is a very complex character -- and you're doing him justice. I hope to see more with him in the future.

and I will hide behind anon because even if you don't know me I'm very shy regardless

ration January 10 2009, 06:12:19 UTC

gtjdghjkk I worry I'm not doing him justice all the time, he can be very tough to pin and I don't think I've ever been 100% sure of anything I've done with him, so the fact that I'm not messing him up means so, so much. Thank you!

ffff come ouuuut and playyy~ I don't bite hard.

sadomasochrist January 10 2009, 23:41:20 UTC

Hi. Going back into hiding now, don't mind me.

madelineusher January 10 2009, 00:51:35 UTC

neo_rpg
-Nina Fortner (zrcadlit)
-Kakyou Kuzuki (bedbound)
-Alfred F. Jones/America (icanhazfreedom)
-Teru Mikami (dr_mikami)
-Sasori (puppetist)

template_rpg
-Toris Laurinaitis/Lithuania (kryzius)

Crit for dropped/inactive/DR characters always welcome.

metafictionally January 10 2009, 02:26:06 UTC

I have so much love for Lithuania, you don't even know. xD;

kryzius January 10 2009, 02:27:52 UTC

T-thank you!

Here, have an adorable icon of adorable.

metafictionally January 10 2009, 02:29:49 UTC

Akajhdfklj YAY~

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hanyaaan January 10 2009, 00:51:42 UTC

discedo
- Kinomoto Sakura (hanyaaan)
- twinFai (touchofgossamr) to neverseperated) (yes, it is spelled wrong. I know)
- TRC!Subaru (neverseparated)

polychromatic
- Azmaria Hendric (pracao)
- twinFai (gracedfall)

super_powers
- Fai "Menyanthes" (iluflowers)

toujourshotel
- Chrona (disturbar)

ms_elegante (I haven't been very active recently, but I hope to change that.)
- Kamui (viagem
- twinFai (misfortunfavors)

Concrit is wonderful and all of my journals have tagged crit posts, so if you would rather talk to me there, please don't hesitate!

envisioned January 10 2009, 01:00:09 UTC

You know what I think of your characters, babe.

hanyaaan January 10 2009, 01:01:58 UTC

That they're all horrible, OOC-riddled failures of the originals? ;3; And you know I love your Kamui to smidges~ ♥ ty bb :'3

pissedkitty January 10 2009, 01:05:33 UTC

fff yeah right <3 o/\o

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samekh January 10 2009, 00:51:51 UTC

samekh January 10 2009, 01:31:11 UTC

First off - really glad that you picked Wolverine back up. ♥ It's good to see him in your line up again.

The only nitpick that I've got is with Edgeworth. I think that you have his voice, but he seems a little passive, especially where the laws are concerned. I know that it's an OOC organization issue as much as an IC one, but he's gotten so far with it, and yet nothing has been cemented. I hope that him and Phoenix do talk to the scientists as soon as possible, and that way things might finally get under way with some sparkling scientisty backing.

samekh January 10 2009, 01:37:12 UTC

Baw, thank you! ♥ I didn't realize how much I missed playing him.

I agree completely, and I'm glad you pointed it out. That has mostly been my OOC fail with following up, since RL was kicking me in the face. But yeah, I do plan on trying to wrap that stuff up and have them talk to the scientists... so that maybe the laws will actually mean something, and he can shove it in Prussia's face. 8)

Thank you, anon!

madeinoblivion January 10 2009, 02:06:54 UTC

Seconding the Wolvie luv. He's been missed.

Uhh...can't say I've got any distinct crit for the moment, though. Zoro's been a trip lately.

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carnality January 10 2009, 00:52:28 UTC

goddamn_ironman -- Tony Stark
clearyourhead -- Jonathan Crane

Both of those at dramadramaduck, though I do post with Tony on SWS and other places; feel free to use this or my personal concrit post. :D

sin_nom January 10 2009, 01:19:34 UTC

...You have Batachu as your icon. XDDD;

I LOVE YOUR TONY'S SNARKINESS AND HIS ARGHHH I AM AN ALCOHOLIC LEAVE ME ALONE AND YOUR CRANE AND HIS CREEPINESS AND OHGOD HIS INTERACTIONS WITH JOKER BUT I WOULD REALLY LIKE TO SEE SOME MORE CRANETRAIN/BATS ACTION. OR A FEAR TOXIN PLOT 8) /botherbotherbother

goddamn_ironman January 10 2009, 01:25:44 UTC

I actually do have a fear toxin plot in mind! I just want to wait until current plotting dies down so I can possibly get two-face and joker in on it >:3

goddamn_ironman January 10 2009, 01:30:54 UTC

sjlksfj Also, thank you XD I'm really trying not to let him being an alcoholic be the focus of his character because realistically, he wouldn't be all BOOZE BOOZE BOOZE all the time-- it's like in the rl, he knows he has a problem he just doesnt want anyone else to because he's happy as he is. Sort of. Maybe.

I was reading plot stuff for IM2 though, so I may start to explore it more. :x

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