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Concrit Post 3

Jan 09, 2009 19:34

How's My Driving?

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samekh January 10 2009, 00:51:51 UTC

samekh January 10 2009, 01:31:11 UTC

First off - really glad that you picked Wolverine back up. ♥ It's good to see him in your line up again.

The only nitpick that I've got is with Edgeworth. I think that you have his voice, but he seems a little passive, especially where the laws are concerned. I know that it's an OOC organization issue as much as an IC one, but he's gotten so far with it, and yet nothing has been cemented. I hope that him and Phoenix do talk to the scientists as soon as possible, and that way things might finally get under way with some sparkling scientisty backing.

samekh January 10 2009, 01:37:12 UTC

Baw, thank you! ♥ I didn't realize how much I missed playing him.

I agree completely, and I'm glad you pointed it out. That has mostly been my OOC fail with following up, since RL was kicking me in the face. But yeah, I do plan on trying to wrap that stuff up and have them talk to the scientists... so that maybe the laws will actually mean something, and he can shove it in Prussia's face. 8)

Thank you, anon!

madeinoblivion January 10 2009, 02:06:54 UTC

Seconding the Wolvie luv. He's been missed.

Uhh...can't say I've got any distinct crit for the moment, though. Zoro's been a trip lately.

samekh January 10 2009, 02:08:13 UTC

\o/ I'm glad people are happy to see him back, haha.

...is that a good trip or a bad trip? 8| haha

madeinoblivion January 10 2009, 02:37:45 UTC

A good trip.

buddha_loves_me January 10 2009, 05:44:44 UTC

*knows you didn't list Kiseki, but:*

I LOVE your Mokona. ;o;

samekh January 10 2009, 17:41:47 UTC

LOL, I only didn't list it because I didn't think I'd get anything here that I couldn't already get from Kiseki's concrit posts! XD;;

But thank you, bb. I appreciate it. WILL HAVE MORE EPIC TIMES ASAP. Thx real life 8|

one_is_hikaru January 10 2009, 07:12:59 UTC

I love your Kyouya. I think you bring out so many important facets of his character so well, and I enjoy it every time he posts.

If anything, and this probably isn't anyone's fault, I'd like to see more conversations between Tamaki and Kyouya? Maybe I just miss them every time. ;; idk.

you know I love you, though, bb~ ♥

samekh January 10 2009, 17:40:36 UTC

Bawww, thank you, bb ♥

I agree, I want to do more stuff with Tamaki and Kyouya too. Me and Naru both have kind of failed in that aspect between hiatuses and RL stuff and just general slowness on tags, but I fully intend on making more wonderous things happen between them!

samekh January 10 2009, 08:09:32 UTC

Hookay, I hesitated with giving you crit for Fye because... it's so difficult for me to put into words just what it is that's off about him, because there is something off.

First of all, I congratulate you on playing the dude when he's from Outo so has none of his issues resolved and then has a dead brother showing up. And yet... having real!Fye show up is where your characterization took a real turn away from what is distinctly Fye. Fye took his brother's name to return to him when he could bring Fye back to life. So having him go by Yuui now, and having him announce this huge canon point in a post to all of Discedo is just off to me. I think Fye would continue to go by his new name, even if his brother did show up. Perhaps he would stress his last name, however, have people call him Flourite-san, perhaps. But there's really nothing that can be done about that now, I guess ( ... )

samekh January 10 2009, 17:52:30 UTC

Well anon, I really, truly appreciate you trying (and not just being like LOLILOVEYOURFAI, because that's never, ever helpful and orz I don't get it?). He's definitely the character I worry most about, and you've made points that I've either already figured I needed to work on, and things I was worried about from the get-go. If ever you have concrit, feel free to drop me a line - there's a concrit post on his journal too, and maybe if some of these things are pointed out to me earlier, and can fix them quicker (and easier, since orz, it's hard to turn back from stuff months later).

The name thing was something that worried me from the second it happened. I had a really had time figuring out the best way to handle it, since he was having like... six billion things happening at once - which was kind of an unexpected overload for me, and I don't think I ever really recovered for it. There isn't too much I can do about it now, since that happened way back in October. It'd only make things worse to step back three months later ( ... )

deadthenred January 10 2009, 20:52:14 UTC

Random passerbyish stalker person saying it makes me happy to see you took Logan up again. I like to read his entries sometimes, you have some pretty good bub-speak.

samekh January 10 2009, 20:54:46 UTC

Baw, thank you! I'm really excited to be playing him again.

And the fact that you play Bucky desperately makes me realize how badly I need to pick someone up at C&C. I need moar Marvel/DC characters to poke. 8D

deadthenred January 10 2009, 21:08:28 UTC

Hehhe, I know that's not really crit but I felt I should say.

Lol, I do play Bucky, don't I? He and our Logan don't get along well :( But we would love to have you at C&C, I'm sure. And there are...lots of Marvel/DC characters to poke.

samekh January 10 2009, 21:10:33 UTC

It's all good. It's nice to know someone has any sort of fondness for the way I play him? Haha.

I think as soon as I decide who to app, I'll head on over~. Marvel canon is one of my strongest, so it's just a matter of making the decision of who I want/who's needed that I could play!

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