Concrit Post 9

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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∞ reply to other people's comments (anon or logged in) with constructive criticism
∞ learn from the suggestions and profit!

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Comments

[samekh]

...this time with less HTML fail. except I still HTML failed all over this shit what the fuck.

@ discedo

Fay D. Flourite | big_kitty | Tsubasa: Reservoir Chronicle
Roronoa Zoro | threesword | One Piece

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[blacklegcook]

I only played with you like what, once? but I did enjoy my interactions with your Zoro. I'd give more, but I haven't played with you enough, but I figured I at least say this much. :3

[gonsai]

BOOM! HEADSHOT!

Have at it, folks.

[gonsai]

I think you are a good role player, but I also think the amount of characters you play effects your playing. If you focused on less I think you could be a lot better, as well as improve IC development.

[gonsai]

To be honest, of the number I play, I only focus on three or so games.

[gonsai]

I think you play up the drama to an unnecessary extent at times. There are ways to develop characters without posting about them crying dramatically, or spouting platitudes, or angsting about their inadequacies. Dramatic moments have their place in rp as in fiction or anything else. But 'moments' does not equal every single time they post.

Aside from that, most of your characters tag around with '...' 'hmm' or an icon, without actually responding to the post in question. It gets really annoying trying to figure out how to respond to those.

[lewdness]

I’ll also link to the anon-enabled crit posts all my LJs have, just in case someone would rather use that, idk.
@ amatomnes
Euphemia li Britannia | Code Geass | pacifisting | Anon enabled C&C post
(Formerly savinworldsbrb // Sora there, for a few months.)

@ microcosm_rp
Euphemia li Britannia | Code Geass | pacifisting
Sora | Kingdom Hearts 2 | savinworldsbrb | Anon enabled C&C post

@ kingdomdressing
Sora | Kingdom Hearts | savinworldsbrb

@ cgdressingroom
Euphemia li Britannia | CG | pacifisting
Euphemia li Britannia | CG | fuckingjapanese
Suzaku Kururugi | CG | spinkicker
Suzaku Kururugi | CG | shinkicks

Plus anyone in my musebox / anyone else I've played, since I've...played a lot of people I don't anymore and I'm too lazy to list them out, ahaha.

Formerly, Suzaku (spinkicker) at somarium and Euphemia (pacifisting at paradisa, thewake_rp and cityofsolace)

[lavaliere]

/jerks your circle

I still love your Euphy. No, really. I wish I could have something more constructive to say, but... /fail ;A;

[lewdness]

AHHHHHNNN, waifu. :|

I always feel like I'm spelling Euph's name wrong by putting -ie instead of -y, lmao.

/WONDERS IF I SHOULD CHANGE THIS.

[lavaliere]

hngk~ ♥

Well? Idk, it's kinda a personal reference I think? Euphy is the canon spelling, so I tend to use that more l-lol.

[scootermcgaffin]

All at campfuckudie

Tatsumi Kanji renovateyourass | Persona 4
Joan Girardi itsmejoan | Joan of Arcadia

and I haven't played him yet but

Victor Borkowski skinofalizard | Young X-Men

[opalinesque]

I adore your Kanji. When IF I ever get Persona 4, it'll probably be because of you.

[tazeredtiger]

Iiiii love Kanji's threads so much. Every time I see him it reminds me of how I should actually start playing my copy of Persona 4. Also while I have not seen Joan's canon, her threads have been really interesting too!

...And I love Victor's lj name so much.

[marypoopins]

@ campfuckudie

Kagura | Gintama | marypoopins

Threads are up to date. I'm planning on posting later today. o/ I WOULD LOVE CRIT especially for her when she's not being her most abrasive. And also humour because well IT'S GINTAMA FOR GODSAKES. My own concrit post is here.

[tazeredtiger]

You have no idea how happy I am that you're back, and every thread you have with Kagura is comedy gold. Seriously, I feel like I'm going to die laughing every time. ...I suck at actual crit. :<

Also also you made me start watching your series. ilu really but ahhh school just started ahhh my free time ahhh

[marypoopins]

♥

ALSO UHUHUHUHU. TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK WHEN YOU'VE WATCHED A COUPLE OF EPISODES.