Concrit Post 9

[hmd_meme]

How's My Driving?

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[chart_my_course]

@ campfuckudie
Ben Tennyson (Ben 10) no_pun_in10ded
Jim Hawkins (Treasure Planet) chart_my_course
Diva Beelze (Evil Diva) notsoevilrly
Zira (The Lion King II: Simba's Pride) hero_to_zira

[tazeredtiger]

I NEED TO THREAD MORE WITH JIM and that's all I got because as usual, you're spot on with him. Also Diva's threads are adorable to read (lol Oregon Trail) and I really loved threading Zira off of Farnsworth. KEEP ON ROCKIN ON.

[notsoevilrly]

YES YOU DO I wonder if I can just. Throw Jim at Amelia in the Oregon Trail post from the sidelines going, "DO I NEED TO HELP YOU BEAT OFF SKEEVY ALIENS?" or something XDD

OMG threading with Farnsworth was amazing. YOUR VOICE IS ABSOLUTELY PERFECT.

♥ ♥ ♥

[geokinetic]

@ entranceway

Terra (Teen Titans) geokinetic
& her mirror hasnoregrets

[geokinetic]

Your Terra seems spot on when you have her interacting with castmates, how she reacts to mansionplot, or when she's dealing with the typical crazy day to day. I like your conscious choice to not make her omg!evul or omg!sotormentedemo.

But I guess I really don't understand her relationship with Sirius, or what your intentions are for her with that?

[nakotaco]

Thanks!

Personally, I don't have any specific intentions for her. Right now, she's just still enjoying that someone likes her, and is treating her the way Sirius does. We'll see where that goes.

[herstoabuse]

@ campfuckudie
» Serph [Digital Devil Saga] | silent_crown
» Otani Atsushi [Lovely Complex] | whoisashrimp
» Tsujimiya Maguri [Shinshi Doumei Cross] | numbertwo_fan
» Shinobu [Tokage] | herstoabuse
» Dio [Casshern Sins] | robosession

@ microcosm_rp
» Estellise Sidos Heurassein [Tales of Vesperia] | notbouncyenough
» Gilbert Nightlay [Pandora Hearts] | boysandgils
» Spock [Star Trek XI] | longandprosper

[alexander]

campfuckudie
➠ Akazukin [ tokyo akazukin ] when_i_guro_up
➠ Arthur Pendragon [ merlin (bbc) ] pratrilineage
➠ Xerxes Break [ pandora hearts ] coulrofabulist
➠ Cain [ utahime ] atonalistic
➠ Dietrich von Lohengrin [ trinity blood ] cognitagonist
➠ Mukuro Rokudou [ katekyo hitman reborn! ] eternalsamba
➠ Savaris Kolrafin Luckens [ chrome shelled regios ] fistingheaven
➠ The Corinthian [ sandman ] trunkate
➠ X-23 [ marvel universe ] adamantinette

comorbidities
➠ Aeris Gainsborough [ final fantasy vii ] kershanked
➠ Mukuro Rokudou [ katekyo hitman reborn! ] adharma
➠ Othello [ the demon ororon ] reversire

[flame_oooooon]

Okay so despite the fact that I may have read/seen like 3 of your canons, all of your threads are really intriguing and some have piqued my interest in actually reading them. Also, I really love it when you run events, they always turn out to be such a blast.

Also this isn't really crit, but I wish I could see more of Arthur. Mostly because I just started watching Merlin, so. XD (idk ping me when he's out or something :<)

[alexander]

Thank you!

. . . haha, YOU ARE ACTUALLY COMPLETELY RIGHT as Arthur has been my backburner/superbackburner for. . . . a few months now! I'm hoping to review canon and get more confident with him, but I think that's valid crit as there are some months where I don't comment at all with him XD;

[knightmare_hime]

I wish I interacted with you more. One of my 'moving resolutions' is to finally sit down and stalk more of your character dreams and open threads. I think you do amazing with all of them, from what I know of the canons. ~_^ Som is lucky to have you.

[gesangvoll]

We need to interact at some point. There's gotta be something our characters have in common or an open log around at some point. xD

[germanyaboveall]

I really don't think I have much of a basis to give crit for your characters, since the only time I've actually seen them (or should I say, Austria) is from times when I've messed around on dear_mun. However, I think that you have Austria down perfectly, from how he talks to how he acts. Stalking Reading your posts from Somarium has further confirmed this, in my opinion.

The way he interacts with people seems very close to how he's seen in canon. But lest I repeat myself and go on forever on the same subject, your Austria is the best that I've seen, and the games you're in are very lucky to have you.