The Lonely Heart Killers [1/3]

[hitoshisakurai]

Title: The Lonely Heart Killers [1/3]
Pairing: JongKey
Rating: R
Word Count: 2379
Genre: AU, romance
Summary: Kibum's a young actor working on his first main role.

Comments

[hitoshisakurai]

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA omg I missed you, "I wanted to have the first spot tbh", you just killed me xDDD

... JONGTAE? But... oh, shit, out of all things I could write for you... um.... D: and if I say that I only enjoyed Jjong's back in the performance, while I find the whole rest too... just, 'too', idk what word to use D: I'VE NEVER WRITTEN A JONGTAE FIC AND I DON'T KNOW IF THAT'S POSSIBLE FOR ME TO IMAGINE THEM GETTING IT ON TBQH
But... idk. Maybe I'll try? /sobs/ I think I need some wine first OTL x"DDD

[yui8_lin]

SPOT 'coz this seems promising really really promising :D

[just2wings]

Change of concept? I'm all for it \o/
I really like how you portrayed Key as an (kind of cold?) actor. The writing was really good, too. Better and better, really <3
And Jude Law... just... lol xD
(I found Jonghyun's solo rather distasteful to be honest. Oh god I am such a prude. Why can't I be normal. Oh well.)

[hitoshisakurai]

Thank you so much for saying that my writing got better!! It made me so happy ide (especially when I remember my first stories written in English XDD)
Yeah, let's leave Jude's case with no comments x"D
(Distasteful? THANKS GOD YOU EXIST the only thing I, let's say 'liked' was, as I wrote, Jjong's back, but the whole rest... uh, even for a crazy fangirl like me that was too much. I can see him getting rid of his all clothes onstage one day, seriously. He seems so eager to do this stuff OTL)

[just2wings]

(Yayz I'm not as alone as I thought xD I'm not a fan of baring skin, and yeah, I agree with you that it was too much. *shrugs*)

[hitoshisakurai]

(You're definitely not, my sis is with us too *and the fact that she hates yaoi in general has nothing to do with it*, so there might be only 3 of us, but we are strong >O but, seriously now. Well, it's rather cheap. And easy to do. And useful when it comes to gaining someone's attention. Idk sometimes I miss those awkward little boys from 2008, you know?)

[chibiyoko]

Jesus Christ. My goooood. This is so awesome I don't even know what to do with myself. :D
Gonna wait here till the next chapter comes out. Good. This is really good.
/waits

[hitoshisakurai]

OMG it's not that good, it's just a pointless idk what >///< but, thank you so much! I'll try not to disappoint with new updates x"D

SPOT <3

[princessliette]

GOSH JONGKEY <3

Re: SPOT <3

[hitoshisakurai]

Yeah, I missed writing them ^^

Re: SPOT <3

[princessliette]

“That was quite stunning, Kibum, you learn really fast! If I knew there was so much chemistry between the two of you before…”

if i were Kibum i'd already shot the director and saying that of course it's stunning and looks so natural. there was a fucking gun on my chest and i didn't know Jjong wasn't serious about it OTL

but anyway it's really nice :D i hope you can update soon..of course when you feel better and i hope you can feel better sonn. i'm so sorry for everything that made you upset :/

Re: SPOT <3

[hitoshisakurai]

That's exactly why Jjong did that xDD Hahahaha xD Kibum was just too shocked to react consciously^^ I'm glad you liked it, thank you bb!!!

And I'll update Ashtray Heart sooner, either today or tomorrow... don't worry about me, ne, and don't apologize for anything, it's not your fault at all, I'm the one at fault actually... *hugs tightly*