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The Lonely Heart Killers [1/3]

Jul 22, 2012 01:23

Title: The Lonely Heart Killers [1/3]
Pairing: JongKey
Rating: R
Word Count: 2379
Genre: AU, romance
Summary: Kibum's a young actor working on his first main role.

( “Want to try it out with me?” he breathes in a husky, deep voice and for a moment, Kibum forgets how to breath. )

☂pairing: jongkey, ✿type: gay, ♫other: fanfic, Ωgenre: AU, ☃lenght: chaptered, ✎rating: R, Ωgenre: romance, ✂fic: lonely heart killers

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just2wings July 22 2012, 00:40:08 UTC

Change of concept? I'm all for it \o/
I really like how you portrayed Key as an (kind of cold?) actor. The writing was really good, too. Better and better, really <3
And Jude Law... just... lol xD
(I found Jonghyun's solo rather distasteful to be honest. Oh god I am such a prude. Why can't I be normal. Oh well.)

hitoshisakurai July 22 2012, 09:18:15 UTC

Thank you so much for saying that my writing got better!! It made me so happy ide (especially when I remember my first stories written in English XDD)
Yeah, let's leave Jude's case with no comments x"D
(Distasteful? THANKS GOD YOU EXIST the only thing I, let's say 'liked' was, as I wrote, Jjong's back, but the whole rest... uh, even for a crazy fangirl like me that was too much. I can see him getting rid of his all clothes onstage one day, seriously. He seems so eager to do this stuff OTL)

just2wings July 22 2012, 19:30:20 UTC

(Yayz I'm not as alone as I thought xD I'm not a fan of baring skin, and yeah, I agree with you that it was too much. *shrugs*)

hitoshisakurai July 22 2012, 19:36:18 UTC

(You're definitely not, my sis is with us too *and the fact that she hates yaoi in general has nothing to do with it*, so there might be only 3 of us, but we are strong >O but, seriously now. Well, it's rather cheap. And easy to do. And useful when it comes to gaining someone's attention. Idk sometimes I miss those awkward little boys from 2008, you know?)

just2wings July 22 2012, 19:45:07 UTC

(Yeah I know. It’s too easy to take off your shirt to get the fans to scream. It’s a lot harder to evoke the same reaction by belting out a high note or popping until your limbs drop. That’s not to say that working out doesn’t take effort, but I guess I’ve just never been a fan of blatantly showing off some skin for… for what? If it’s to surprise and excite the fans, then we must be the odd ones out who don’t enjoy that sort of thing. I find it cheap, too, and unnecessary.
And funnily enough, I've been looking all day for past pics of Key's old hairstyles and all those group photos from 2008/9 I stumbled upon made me all giddy :)

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