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KINK MEME AND DISCUSSION HAVE MOVED: http://hetalia-kink.dreamwidth.org/

Talk with other anons from hetalia_kink about everything and anything related to the kink meme.

Allowable topics include, but are not limited to: Characterization, Fills (past or ongoing), mechanics of kinks, seconding threads, prompts, writing help, general kink meme fic discussion,

Comments

Constructive Criticism

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This thread will be reposted again on page 25

Uncritiqued fills

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The following requests for concrit from page 21 have not been filled as of this posting:

2 Greece/Japan fics: http://hetaliakinkchat.livejournal.com/598.html?thread=1324630#t1324630

Germany and Italy: http://hetaliakinkchat.livejournal.com/598.html?thread=1328214#t1328214

Germany-Taking on the pain

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Request Summary: During WWII, Germany knew about the Holocaust. So, due to guilt,he used magic to try and alleviate the pain for all of the nations involved in the war. Especially those who were affected by the Holocaust. However, it was too big for him to take all of the pain so those nations still felt some. Then in the future, the nations find out. OP want to know what their recations would be.

Fill link: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/20706.html?thread=82143970#t82143970

Comments: I feel like it started going downhill after part 17. I had midterms so... I feel like my part 19 was fine and then it started to lose something. Any suggestions? I'll let you know right now, that I may not update/rewrite it for a while due to me not doing so well in uni right now. Damn Phonology. So, if I don't reply back in a timely manner, I apologize ahead of time. Thanks for your suggestions ahead of time!

Netherlands x Prussia - corporal punishment for defaulting on a loan

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Fic summary: Prussia borrowed money from Netherlands. He can't make this month's repayment, so Netherlands can take "payment in kind". Ned uses this to have a power trip over Prussia. Prussia hates it since he doesn't like being the submissive one.

I have posted *a bit* of it on my LJ (not on the meme yet). I want to know if there is too much build up / if it is too slow moving. If the start is too slow then no one's going to read much further :/

Here is a link: http://swell-swell.livejournal.com/887.html

You can post comments, anon or logged in, on my LJ.

One thing which I have already realised I need to fix up is the continual reference to the power imbalance between them - I think I mention it too often.

Your reviews and input would be appreciated. Thanking you kindly in advance :D

England/Queen Victoria, Lie back and think of England

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http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/21382.html?thread=87538822#t87538822

Part 22 - England/France - Urination fetish - "The agreement"

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Prompt: Frances wants England to urinate on him. England is unsure at first but ends up doing and greatly enjoys it.

Bonus: France is kneeling at England's feet when he gets pissed on.
Bonus 2: France gives England a blow job after England is done pissing on him.
Bonus 3: France has an orgasm just from the piss/giving oral, without touching himself.

http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/21382.html?thread=89268102#t89268102

The story: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/21382.html?thread=89427078#t89427078

fem!Greece/Japan - death of a pet

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Request prompt: Any character/pairing dealing and coming in terms with a dying pet or death a pet.

Fill: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/21753.html?thread=89601273#t89601273

Basically, I'm just curious about fem!Greece's character, whether she stands as her own despite retaining some similarities to normal!Greece (calm, contemplative).

Also, I'm not sure how Kiku comes across to readers as well, being the man in this relationship (Greece/fem!Japan fills are more common, so I'm not sure how the usual Giripan fan actually feel about fem!Greece/Japan instead). Does he still sound much like how normal!Japan might behave in this situation (awkward-dork but still well-meaning and all)?

Did I manage to portray what is essentially still Giripan, even with one of them genderbent?

Your feedback and crit would be much appreciated, anons. And thank you for your time and any suggestions in advance! :)