Gorgeous [Part 1/?]
anonymous
February 6 2010, 06:38:02 UTC
(This is my first time responding to a fill, as well as my first time writing anything of the APH fandom. My apologies if this turns out crappy!)The texture of a thick rope knotted to bind his hands together behind his back, was the first thing Arthur became aware of as he came to. This was shortly followed by the intoxicating scent of leather, a draft of cool air on his (alarmingly) naked body, and the distinct, overwhelming presence of darkness even as he blinked his eyes open. As he struggled to sit up from where he had been toppled over on his side, the Englishman judged that wherever he was, the floors and walls had been constructed of concrete - likely a basement or cellar of some kind. Above him, the sound of footsteps grew from silence, increasing in resonance until they abruptly ceased
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Gorgeous [Part 3b/?]
anonymous
February 18 2010, 08:13:24 UTC
He counted up to eleven lashings before the number became obscure and the pain mingled with the masochistic pleasure it wrought. Alfred was thankful for the support that the suspended bar provided, for it was not long before his knees became jelloid and his legs beginning to collapse. He stopped himself before he could feel the pressure of the cuffs cutting into his wrists with the descent of his sagging body. He was a hero, and as such, he wouldn't - no, couldn't - allow himself to be defeated by a mere kink!
The moment that the lashings ceased, the American released a faint sigh. If it had gone on any longer, he probably would have given in - so totally not a heroic thing to do
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Re: Gorgeous [Part 3b/?]
anonymous
February 18 2010, 08:35:22 UTC
Hot damn, author!anon. Emphasis on the "hot"!
Also, this? He was a hero, and as such, he wouldn't - no, couldn't - allow himself to be defeated by a mere kink! This made me laugh crazily, in the best of ways. O Alfred, honey.
Excellent use of Alfred's full name, btw, and hearing Arthur calling him "love" is strangely hot for so many reasons. A++
Author!Anon apologizes
anonymous
March 6 2010, 22:38:10 UTC
Many apologies for the lateness in updates. My internet has been down for a while, so I wasn't able to access the online notepad I've been writing this fill on. Not to mention that I've been feeling like utter shite this last week while simultaneously attempting to finish up a first draft on a novel.
So in short: I'll be attempting to finish this all up within the following week. =)
Re: Gorgeous [Part 4/5]
anonymous
March 11 2010, 09:57:11 UTC
Alfred was silent but for the hiss of air forced from his nostrils as Arthur fucked his mouth faster, slightly harder, but always mindful not to make the younger nation gag or suffocate. Warmth ran down the Briton's spine, trickling south to his groin and pooling there as a particular sensation of anticipation began to build from his feet upwards. Feeling his core muscles beginning to tighten, thighs trembling as he forcefully kept on abusing the other nation's mouth, Arthur let himself be taken by pleasure
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SO HOT
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♥♥♥♥♥
I absolutely love it so far! Just what I wanted and more.
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The moment that the lashings ceased, the American released a faint sigh. If it had gone on any longer, he probably would have given in - so totally not a heroic thing to do ( ... )
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Also, this? He was a hero, and as such, he wouldn't - no, couldn't - allow himself to be defeated by a mere kink! This made me laugh crazily, in the best of ways. O Alfred, honey.
Excellent use of Alfred's full name, btw, and hearing Arthur calling him "love" is strangely hot for so many reasons. A++
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ALFRED FUCKING JONES, BITCH!
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F5F5F5F5F5F5F5
Soooo hot anon~ @w@ <3
PLEASEEE UPDATE LIKE.. NOW.
[[and pfft. alfred fucking jones, bitch.]]
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umm could I have a link to the earlier parts? *fails*
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That will take you back to the original request, which has the first few parts on it as well. =)
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This is really hot, anon. :)
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ReCaptcha: "upbraids citizen" ... I don't think my country likes that idea, actually.
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But than again you like it huh Daddy? *smirk*
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So in short: I'll be attempting to finish this all up within the following week. =)
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Sorry all the shit's hitting the fan at once; life likes to do that, doesn't it? ^_^; Good luck with your novel! :Db
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