New Fill [1/~4]
anonymous
June 25 2010, 15:19:09 UTC
Okay, so I'm not the person who started to fill this. And I don't think my version will be nearly as good. But I really think this needs to be filled, so here's what I've got.America had never been able to keep track of time very well. He preferred to live in the present, even in the future. The past was just the past; he didn’t think about it much
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New Fill [2/~4]
anonymous
June 25 2010, 15:21:31 UTC
He opens his mouth to say he’s sorry and he’ll just go take care of that, but all that comes out is a small, strangled noise. Canada crawls over to him until their noses are almost touching, his thigh between America’s legs. Alfred looks away and tells himself furiously that he will not hump his brother; because that would be wrong in so many different ways he can’t even count them
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New Fill [3/4]
anonymous
June 25 2010, 15:22:31 UTC
“Don’t say that!” America exclaims, his face bright red. The lust is creeping back into his head again, and the way Canada is looking at him, predatory, is going straight to his crotch
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New Fill [4/4]
anonymous
June 25 2010, 15:25:47 UTC
Finally, America relaxes a bit, and makes a soft whimpering noise. Matthew lets go of his reservations, his hips snapping forwards. Alfred moans loudly and reaches up to cling to his shoulders. Canada sets up a punishing rhythm. He pounds into the other nation’s body relentlessly, giving in to his desires after what feels like holding back forever
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Re: New Fill [4/4]
anonymous
June 25 2010, 15:56:06 UTC
I love this thing, especially the beginning, when it's just building and it's so hot with only a few suggested implied things, but the thing that grabs me most is - is Canada dissing America on purpose? "Yeah, you're easy after Cuba, who's much bigger." Oh, the heights of Canadian passive-aggressiveness, even when he's all lust-crazed, lol.
Re: New Fill [4/4]
anonymous
June 26 2010, 10:31:32 UTC
Hahahaha, oh man yeah, passive-aggressive sniping at America , our national pastime. (But Canadians are never rarely so hot as Canada is in this fill when WE do it)
Re: New Fill [4/4]
anonymous
June 25 2010, 19:30:05 UTC
Aww, I <3 you, too. Thanks for commenting.
Humm, showers... *mental image of wet!Canada* I think I like that idea.
Ahoge usage is something I'm a huge fan of, but my kind of screwed up headcanon says that if you pull on Canada's ahoge he'll switch to Newfoundland!Canada. xD So I'd probably be laughing to hard to actually do that, even if I ignored my headcanon.
I'd really given up hope that the first story would ever be updated (sob; even though I reread it all the time and hope), so seeing this just... oh my god, it seriously made my week. My month, even. Thank you so much! T_T
This was fucking hot. And somehow, even though I didn't state them in the prompt, you managed to hit a lot of my other kinks because you are naturally awesome: sex against a couch, the coming inside America four times (ESPECIALLY THIS, GOD I LOVE YOU), the blowjob, the wanting just to rut against his brother. Ffffffuck. ♥
I loved Canada's passive aggressive comparison of America to Cuba. Pfft. XD XD XD And then playing video games in the beginning was awesomely dorky and perfect and them.
alsjlskd. And Canada just... taking charge, guh. Love love love his "Alfy" for some reason; I've never heard that, and usually I don't do the nicknames, but that's going down in memory for its quirky adorableness.
“Don’t, don’t, don’t,” Matthew mocks him - For some reason, this is really hot. XD
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anonymous
June 26 2010, 17:41:40 UTC
eeee, it's OP. <3
I was really hoping the original filler would come back, too, but it didn't look like it was going to happen. I'm glad you like my version.
Somehow, I seem to write sex scenes on couches fairly often. idk. Well, they weren't going to stop. >D
Actually, when I first saw the original fill wasn't done, I started thinking about where it could go, and the idea of Canada comparing his brother to Cuba while he's going down on him got into my head. And I just couldn't stop thinking about it. It's totally my headcanon now that Canada likes giving bjs, and it's more or less your fault. xD
I'm such a nerd myself, I don't even know what non-geeks do when they hang out. Watch sports? idk.
They've known each other since forever, so they would have nicknames. I wasn't sure about it, but I couldn't think of anything else. ><
Passive-aggresive, kind of mean Canada is super-hot for me. I'm glad you like it, too. <3
I really want to draw America against the couch, but I have like 5 other things I'm drawing. >//////< Well, they'
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Re: author!anon loves you, too
anonymous
June 28 2010, 04:26:51 UTC
Yeah, I've asked around on the Discussion Post about the original filler, too, but they seem to have completely disappeared. :( This breaks my heart, but... God, I am so glad you wrote this. I was thinking I'd never get to see it. T_T
You write sex on a couch masterfully, that's why! X3
Bwahaha, I totally believe in the Canada blowjob!canon. Especially with the Cuba element. XD XD
Me either. Being a geek, I am somewhat curious. IT CANNOT BE AS FUN AS WHAT WE DO.
If you keep going, that'd be awesome. So very awesome. I would die of awesome. However, even if you don't, the fic supports itself as truly Awesometastic Awesome, no matter. ♥ Thank you again, author!anon~ ♥
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I feel a bit sorry for poor America though.
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It would be amazing if you continued... maybe a shower scene with ahoge usage?
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Humm, showers... *mental image of wet!Canada* I think I like that idea.
Ahoge usage is something I'm a huge fan of, but my kind of screwed up headcanon says that if you pull on Canada's ahoge he'll switch to Newfoundland!Canada. xD So I'd probably be laughing to hard to actually do that, even if I ignored my headcanon.
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This was fucking hot. And somehow, even though I didn't state them in the prompt, you managed to hit a lot of my other kinks because you are naturally awesome: sex against a couch, the coming inside America four times (ESPECIALLY THIS, GOD I LOVE YOU), the blowjob, the wanting just to rut against his brother. Ffffffuck. ♥
I loved Canada's passive aggressive comparison of America to Cuba. Pfft. XD XD XD And then playing video games in the beginning was awesomely dorky and perfect and them.
alsjlskd. And Canada just... taking charge, guh. Love love love his "Alfy" for some reason; I've never heard that, and usually I don't do the nicknames, but that's going down in memory for its quirky adorableness.
“Don’t, don’t, don’t,” Matthew mocks him - For some reason, this is really hot. XD ( ... )
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I was really hoping the original filler would come back, too, but it didn't look like it was going to happen. I'm glad you like my version.
Somehow, I seem to write sex scenes on couches fairly often. idk. Well, they weren't going to stop. >D
Actually, when I first saw the original fill wasn't done, I started thinking about where it could go, and the idea of Canada comparing his brother to Cuba while he's going down on him got into my head. And I just couldn't stop thinking about it. It's totally my headcanon now that Canada likes giving bjs, and it's more or less your fault. xD
I'm such a nerd myself, I don't even know what non-geeks do when they hang out. Watch sports? idk.
They've known each other since forever, so they would have nicknames. I wasn't sure about it, but I couldn't think of anything else. ><
Passive-aggresive, kind of mean Canada is super-hot for me. I'm glad you like it, too. <3
I really want to draw America against the couch, but I have like 5 other things I'm drawing. >//////< Well, they' ( ... )
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You write sex on a couch masterfully, that's why! X3
Bwahaha, I totally believe in the Canada blowjob!canon. Especially with the Cuba element. XD XD
Me either. Being a geek, I am somewhat curious. IT CANNOT BE AS FUN AS WHAT WE DO.
If you keep going, that'd be awesome. So very awesome. I would die of awesome. However, even if you don't, the fic supports itself as truly Awesometastic Awesome, no matter. ♥ Thank you again, author!anon~ ♥
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