New Fill [3/4]
anonymous
June 25 2010, 15:22:31 UTC
“Don’t say that!” America exclaims, his face bright red. The lust is creeping back into his head again, and the way Canada is looking at him, predatory, is going straight to his crotch.
“Don’t, don’t, don’t,” Matthew mocks him, pulling his own pants off before starting on Alfred’s. “If that’s all you’ve got to say, then just shut up. This has happened to us before, you knew what you were getting into.”
“I didn’t!” America exclaims. It takes a conscious effort not to pull his brother closer, close enough to rut against him. The though both arouses and disgusts him.
“Every 25 years, brother,” Canada says darkly. “This happens to you, too, doesn’t it?” America thinks back. Now that it’s been mentioned, he does remember spending an entire weekend whacking off, a few decades ago. He’d thought it was just because he hadn’t got laid in a while.
“I normally go to Cuba’s house, when this happens,” Canada continues, his voice somewhat angry, but getting lustier with each word. “But no, you had to make me come over to try your stupid game. And now you have to deal with the consequences.”
America’s eyes widen. Shit. This is starting to creep him out in a huge way.
“Is there any lube?”
“You’re not fucking me.”
“You’re quite mistaken, there,” Matthew replies darkly. “If you haven’t got any, I’ll just use spit.”
Alfred glances at the other nation’s cock. No way. No way is that going in him. If his own dick twitches at the thought, that’s just because his mind is clouded over. Jesus, he can barely think.
“It’s in my bedroom,” he whispers. Canada gets up to go get it. America isn’t sure whether he wants to get away or hump the cushions. When Matthew returns, he’s still exactly where he was before.
When Canada gets back, he kneels between Alfred’s legs and slicks up his fingers. America watches, getting harder by the second. When the first finger slides into him, way too easily, he can’t hold back a moan. It feels way better than he thought it would. He needs more, almost instantly.
Canada only thrusts the first finger in and out a few times before adding a second, watching his fingers slide in and out, almost hypnotized. Alfred arches his back and moans, coherent thought leaving him with each thrust, his cock fully erect, now. He’s panting and writhing, anything to get more of this, more of Matthew’s fingers.
Canada pushes a third finger in, his own breath getting short and heavy as a foggy lust creeps over his mind. He’s never realized how sexy his brother is, before. But here, laid out in front of him, back arched, hands grasping at the couch by his head, head thrown back and face flushed, there’s no other word to describe him.
A voice in the back of his head says that this is his BROTHER and it is absolutely wrong to be doing this, but when Alfred moans and pushed down on his fingers, he can’t hold on to the trail of thought any longer.
When he removes his fingers, America keens and writhes under him. His hands tremble as he slicks himself up, forcing himself to be generous with the lube. He lines himself up and presses in, slowly, slowly. There’s nothing he wants more than to slam in and take what he wants, using this beautiful body for what it was obviously meant for, but he resists the urge. Just barely, but he does.
When he’s all the way in, he stills, taking deep breaths and trying to chase the tendrils of lust out of his mind for long enough to let his brother adjust to the feeling. Alfred’s heels are digging into his back, his hands clenching the arm of the couch so tightly his knuckles turn white. A sheen of sweat glistens on his brow. Canada bites his lip hard and looks away. He has to be gentle, if only at first. Gentle, gentle, gentle…
New Fill [4/4]
anonymous
June 25 2010, 15:25:47 UTC
Finally, America relaxes a bit, and makes a soft whimpering noise. Matthew lets go of his reservations, his hips snapping forwards. Alfred moans loudly and reaches up to cling to his shoulders. Canada sets up a punishing rhythm. He pounds into the other nation’s body relentlessly, giving in to his desires after what feels like holding back forever.
America meets every thrust, rubbing his cock against the other man’s stomach. They both moan and pant, losing themselves to this urge, this unstoppable need, moving together like one, as if they were made to go together.
Matthew comes first, hot into America’s tight body. But even after, he’s still hard, painfully so. He keeps going, not paying attention to anything but the sensations, the sounds Alfred makes. When America comes, he digs his nails into the other’s back, pulling himself as close as they can possibly go.
When he realizes that Matthew isn’t going to stop, he’s not sure if he’s relieved or not, but his body keeping meeting the thrusts, matching his brother’s pace. Rational thought is getting more and more difficult with each passing second. He decides to give up on it, and loses himself to the feeling.
It’s not until their fourth orgasm that Canada pulls out. America simply lies on the couch, trembling and exhausted. Matthew’s come drips out of him onto the sofa, but he’s too tired to move.
“We should get a shower,” Canada says, sitting on the floor, sweat dripping from his hair. He wipes Alfred’s come from his chest with one hand, then just looks at it, unsure what to do. America grunts noncommittally. Canada pushes himself upright and heads for the bathroom.
A/N: Alright, that's what I've got. I feel like it could continue, but I really can't write America (obviously.) If original!filler is reading this, PLEASE COME BACK~! If anon really want me to keep going anyways, I could, but you'd have to give suggestions.
Re: New Fill [4/4]
anonymous
June 25 2010, 15:56:06 UTC
I love this thing, especially the beginning, when it's just building and it's so hot with only a few suggested implied things, but the thing that grabs me most is - is Canada dissing America on purpose? "Yeah, you're easy after Cuba, who's much bigger." Oh, the heights of Canadian passive-aggressiveness, even when he's all lust-crazed, lol.
Re: New Fill [4/4]
anonymous
June 26 2010, 10:31:32 UTC
Hahahaha, oh man yeah, passive-aggressive sniping at America , our national pastime. (But Canadians are never rarely so hot as Canada is in this fill when WE do it)
Re: New Fill [4/4]
anonymous
June 25 2010, 19:30:05 UTC
Aww, I <3 you, too. Thanks for commenting.
Humm, showers... *mental image of wet!Canada* I think I like that idea.
Ahoge usage is something I'm a huge fan of, but my kind of screwed up headcanon says that if you pull on Canada's ahoge he'll switch to Newfoundland!Canada. xD So I'd probably be laughing to hard to actually do that, even if I ignored my headcanon.
I'd really given up hope that the first story would ever be updated (sob; even though I reread it all the time and hope), so seeing this just... oh my god, it seriously made my week. My month, even. Thank you so much! T_T
This was fucking hot. And somehow, even though I didn't state them in the prompt, you managed to hit a lot of my other kinks because you are naturally awesome: sex against a couch, the coming inside America four times (ESPECIALLY THIS, GOD I LOVE YOU), the blowjob, the wanting just to rut against his brother. Ffffffuck. ♥
I loved Canada's passive aggressive comparison of America to Cuba. Pfft. XD XD XD And then playing video games in the beginning was awesomely dorky and perfect and them.
alsjlskd. And Canada just... taking charge, guh. Love love love his "Alfy" for some reason; I've never heard that, and usually I don't do the nicknames, but that's going down in memory for its quirky adorableness.
“Don’t, don’t, don’t,” Matthew mocks him - For some reason, this is really hot. XD;;
The descriptions of America against the sofa as they're having sex are lovely, by the way, and sexy as fuck all. ♥ I REALLY LIKE THEM. And aslkdjslkd. OH MY GOD I LOVED THE MULTIPLE ORGASMS AND COME LINES. ALL OF THAT. YES. GOD. LOVE YOU. HARDCORE, LOVE YOU.
If this is where you end it, it's still an awesome fill and that is perfectly all right. But secretly, I sob and hope you continue this sexiness for as long as you'd like. Like in the shower. Or Canada getting hard in it so he has to come back and bend America over the sofa for more. Or they could just have sex everywhere this weekend, LOL. I'm sure America can take it! /shot HE'S A HERO. Sensitivity after so much multiple and prolonged sex could be a lot of fun, too - you know, America feeling sore and sensitive, but still really getting off on that, and any come play.
... But, uh, not that I've daydreamt about this fill at all. >.> I mean. Yeah. YOU DON'T HAVE TO CONTINUE IT BECAUSE YOU STILL HAVE MY LOVE, BUT JUST SAYING.
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anonymous
June 26 2010, 17:41:40 UTC
eeee, it's OP. <3
I was really hoping the original filler would come back, too, but it didn't look like it was going to happen. I'm glad you like my version.
Somehow, I seem to write sex scenes on couches fairly often. idk. Well, they weren't going to stop. >D
Actually, when I first saw the original fill wasn't done, I started thinking about where it could go, and the idea of Canada comparing his brother to Cuba while he's going down on him got into my head. And I just couldn't stop thinking about it. It's totally my headcanon now that Canada likes giving bjs, and it's more or less your fault. xD
I'm such a nerd myself, I don't even know what non-geeks do when they hang out. Watch sports? idk.
They've known each other since forever, so they would have nicknames. I wasn't sure about it, but I couldn't think of anything else. ><
Passive-aggresive, kind of mean Canada is super-hot for me. I'm glad you like it, too. <3
I really want to draw America against the couch, but I have like 5 other things I'm drawing. >//////< Well, they're in heat, after all...
I do have ideas for this, and long comments make me ever so happy. I might keep going.
Re: author!anon loves you, too
anonymous
June 28 2010, 04:26:51 UTC
Yeah, I've asked around on the Discussion Post about the original filler, too, but they seem to have completely disappeared. :( This breaks my heart, but... God, I am so glad you wrote this. I was thinking I'd never get to see it. T_T
You write sex on a couch masterfully, that's why! X3
Bwahaha, I totally believe in the Canada blowjob!canon. Especially with the Cuba element. XD XD
Me either. Being a geek, I am somewhat curious. IT CANNOT BE AS FUN AS WHAT WE DO.
If you keep going, that'd be awesome. So very awesome. I would die of awesome. However, even if you don't, the fic supports itself as truly Awesometastic Awesome, no matter. ♥ Thank you again, author!anon~ ♥
“Don’t, don’t, don’t,” Matthew mocks him, pulling his own pants off before starting on Alfred’s. “If that’s all you’ve got to say, then just shut up. This has happened to us before, you knew what you were getting into.”
“I didn’t!” America exclaims. It takes a conscious effort not to pull his brother closer, close enough to rut against him. The though both arouses and disgusts him.
“Every 25 years, brother,” Canada says darkly. “This happens to you, too, doesn’t it?” America thinks back. Now that it’s been mentioned, he does remember spending an entire weekend whacking off, a few decades ago. He’d thought it was just because he hadn’t got laid in a while.
“I normally go to Cuba’s house, when this happens,” Canada continues, his voice somewhat angry, but getting lustier with each word. “But no, you had to make me come over to try your stupid game. And now you have to deal with the consequences.”
America’s eyes widen. Shit. This is starting to creep him out in a huge way.
“Is there any lube?”
“You’re not fucking me.”
“You’re quite mistaken, there,” Matthew replies darkly. “If you haven’t got any, I’ll just use spit.”
Alfred glances at the other nation’s cock. No way. No way is that going in him. If his own dick twitches at the thought, that’s just because his mind is clouded over. Jesus, he can barely think.
“It’s in my bedroom,” he whispers. Canada gets up to go get it. America isn’t sure whether he wants to get away or hump the cushions. When Matthew returns, he’s still exactly where he was before.
When Canada gets back, he kneels between Alfred’s legs and slicks up his fingers. America watches, getting harder by the second. When the first finger slides into him, way too easily, he can’t hold back a moan. It feels way better than he thought it would. He needs more, almost instantly.
Canada only thrusts the first finger in and out a few times before adding a second, watching his fingers slide in and out, almost hypnotized. Alfred arches his back and moans, coherent thought leaving him with each thrust, his cock fully erect, now. He’s panting and writhing, anything to get more of this, more of Matthew’s fingers.
Canada pushes a third finger in, his own breath getting short and heavy as a foggy lust creeps over his mind. He’s never realized how sexy his brother is, before. But here, laid out in front of him, back arched, hands grasping at the couch by his head, head thrown back and face flushed, there’s no other word to describe him.
A voice in the back of his head says that this is his BROTHER and it is absolutely wrong to be doing this, but when Alfred moans and pushed down on his fingers, he can’t hold on to the trail of thought any longer.
When he removes his fingers, America keens and writhes under him. His hands tremble as he slicks himself up, forcing himself to be generous with the lube. He lines himself up and presses in, slowly, slowly. There’s nothing he wants more than to slam in and take what he wants, using this beautiful body for what it was obviously meant for, but he resists the urge. Just barely, but he does.
When he’s all the way in, he stills, taking deep breaths and trying to chase the tendrils of lust out of his mind for long enough to let his brother adjust to the feeling. Alfred’s heels are digging into his back, his hands clenching the arm of the couch so tightly his knuckles turn white. A sheen of sweat glistens on his brow. Canada bites his lip hard and looks away. He has to be gentle, if only at first. Gentle, gentle, gentle…
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America meets every thrust, rubbing his cock against the other man’s stomach. They both moan and pant, losing themselves to this urge, this unstoppable need, moving together like one, as if they were made to go together.
Matthew comes first, hot into America’s tight body. But even after, he’s still hard, painfully so. He keeps going, not paying attention to anything but the sensations, the sounds Alfred makes. When America comes, he digs his nails into the other’s back, pulling himself as close as they can possibly go.
When he realizes that Matthew isn’t going to stop, he’s not sure if he’s relieved or not, but his body keeping meeting the thrusts, matching his brother’s pace. Rational thought is getting more and more difficult with each passing second. He decides to give up on it, and loses himself to the feeling.
It’s not until their fourth orgasm that Canada pulls out. America simply lies on the couch, trembling and exhausted. Matthew’s come drips out of him onto the sofa, but he’s too tired to move.
“We should get a shower,” Canada says, sitting on the floor, sweat dripping from his hair. He wipes Alfred’s come from his chest with one hand, then just looks at it, unsure what to do. America grunts noncommittally. Canada pushes himself upright and heads for the bathroom.
A/N: Alright, that's what I've got. I feel like it could continue, but I really can't write America (obviously.) If original!filler is reading this, PLEASE COME BACK~! If anon really want me to keep going anyways, I could, but you'd have to give suggestions.
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I feel a bit sorry for poor America though.
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It would be amazing if you continued... maybe a shower scene with ahoge usage?
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Humm, showers... *mental image of wet!Canada* I think I like that idea.
Ahoge usage is something I'm a huge fan of, but my kind of screwed up headcanon says that if you pull on Canada's ahoge he'll switch to Newfoundland!Canada. xD So I'd probably be laughing to hard to actually do that, even if I ignored my headcanon.
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This was fucking hot. And somehow, even though I didn't state them in the prompt, you managed to hit a lot of my other kinks because you are naturally awesome: sex against a couch, the coming inside America four times (ESPECIALLY THIS, GOD I LOVE YOU), the blowjob, the wanting just to rut against his brother. Ffffffuck. ♥
I loved Canada's passive aggressive comparison of America to Cuba. Pfft. XD XD XD And then playing video games in the beginning was awesomely dorky and perfect and them.
alsjlskd. And Canada just... taking charge, guh. Love love love his "Alfy" for some reason; I've never heard that, and usually I don't do the nicknames, but that's going down in memory for its quirky adorableness.
“Don’t, don’t, don’t,” Matthew mocks him - For some reason, this is really hot. XD;;
The descriptions of America against the sofa as they're having sex are lovely, by the way, and sexy as fuck all. ♥ I REALLY LIKE THEM. And aslkdjslkd. OH MY GOD I LOVED THE MULTIPLE ORGASMS AND COME LINES. ALL OF THAT. YES. GOD. LOVE YOU. HARDCORE, LOVE YOU.
If this is where you end it, it's still an awesome fill and that is perfectly all right. But secretly, I sob and hope you continue this sexiness for as long as you'd like. Like in the shower. Or Canada getting hard in it so he has to come back and bend America over the sofa for more. Or they could just have sex everywhere this weekend, LOL. I'm sure America can take it! /shot HE'S A HERO. Sensitivity after so much multiple and prolonged sex could be a lot of fun, too - you know, America feeling sore and sensitive, but still really getting off on that, and any come play.
... But, uh, not that I've daydreamt about this fill at all. >.> I mean. Yeah. YOU DON'T HAVE TO CONTINUE IT BECAUSE YOU STILL HAVE MY LOVE, BUT JUST SAYING.
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I was really hoping the original filler would come back, too, but it didn't look like it was going to happen. I'm glad you like my version.
Somehow, I seem to write sex scenes on couches fairly often. idk. Well, they weren't going to stop. >D
Actually, when I first saw the original fill wasn't done, I started thinking about where it could go, and the idea of Canada comparing his brother to Cuba while he's going down on him got into my head. And I just couldn't stop thinking about it. It's totally my headcanon now that Canada likes giving bjs, and it's more or less your fault. xD
I'm such a nerd myself, I don't even know what non-geeks do when they hang out. Watch sports? idk.
They've known each other since forever, so they would have nicknames. I wasn't sure about it, but I couldn't think of anything else. ><
Passive-aggresive, kind of mean Canada is super-hot for me. I'm glad you like it, too. <3
I really want to draw America against the couch, but I have like 5 other things I'm drawing. >//////< Well, they're in heat, after all...
I do have ideas for this, and long comments make me ever so happy. I might keep going.
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You write sex on a couch masterfully, that's why! X3
Bwahaha, I totally believe in the Canada blowjob!canon. Especially with the Cuba element. XD XD
Me either. Being a geek, I am somewhat curious. IT CANNOT BE AS FUN AS WHAT WE DO.
If you keep going, that'd be awesome. So very awesome. I would die of awesome. However, even if you don't, the fic supports itself as truly Awesometastic Awesome, no matter. ♥ Thank you again, author!anon~ ♥
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