Re: Getting it Over With- Alfred/Fem!Matthew
anonymous
February 12 2010, 05:44:49 UTC
Veyr cute start to the fill!
Anon only has one issue. They both seem very accepting right away. There's no "Wait, you're my brother/sister!" going on, maybe you have a plan for that, but it seems odd that they don't squick at all about the idea. They must have some concept of the idea that it's wrong.
Still! Interested to see where you take it, anon ^^
Re: Getting it Over With- Alfred/Fem!Matthew
anonymous
February 12 2010, 15:52:38 UTC
Sorry, this was a drabble so I had to cut out a lot of the stuff I had planned...
I was trying to imply that they both have kind of an awkward crush on one another, but thought the other person didn't return it because, you know, incest. So neither of them really wants to complain because this is the only time they'll ever get to act on their feelings. In the stuff I had to cut out, I had a LOT more incest-guilt, exploring their previous relationship, etc, but I had to cut the second half of what I wrote for space... Sorry! ^^;
Re: Getting it Over With- Alfred/Fem!Matthew
anonymous
February 14 2010, 02:41:13 UTC
This is so sweet! Awwww I have a weak spot for close, fluffy, caring sibling relationships and I adore USA/Canada. But this is a new and surprising but nice twist on the usual, with femCanada (I don't think I've seen this before) and them actually being attracted to each other despite being siblings in a realistic context.
I love how you wrote both so shy and caring/delicate toward the other, not wanting to hurt the other. And AWWW they tried dating other people, but still they feel the strongest about each other! ALFRED LMAO, what a awkward, shy, awesome-tastic suggestion! Awww he's saving himself for a special person his sister?!!? and LMAO at Canada who couldn't resist it and actually agreed.
This is going to be either so cracky or so sweet, but I'm gonna love it. :D WOW This fill is gonna blow me away! so yummy
I can't wait to read the next part! I'm so excited! Please please please continue wonderful author anon!
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Anon only has one issue. They both seem very accepting right away. There's no "Wait, you're my brother/sister!" going on, maybe you have a plan for that, but it seems odd that they don't squick at all about the idea. They must have some concept of the idea that it's wrong.
Still! Interested to see where you take it, anon ^^
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I was trying to imply that they both have kind of an awkward crush on one another, but thought the other person didn't return it because, you know, incest. So neither of them really wants to complain because this is the only time they'll ever get to act on their feelings. In the stuff I had to cut out, I had a LOT more incest-guilt, exploring their previous relationship, etc, but I had to cut the second half of what I wrote for space... Sorry! ^^;
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I have a weak spot for close, fluffy, caring sibling relationships and I adore USA/Canada. But this is a new and surprising but nice twist on the usual, with femCanada (I don't think I've seen this before) and them actually being attracted to each other despite being siblings in a realistic context.
I love how you wrote both so shy and caring/delicate toward the other, not wanting to hurt the other. And AWWW they tried dating other people, but still they feel the strongest about each other! ALFRED LMAO, what a awkward, shy, awesome-tastic suggestion! Awww he's saving himself for a special person his sister?!!? and LMAO at Canada who couldn't resist it and actually agreed.
This is going to be either so cracky or so sweet, but I'm gonna love it. :D
WOW This fill is gonna blow me away! so yummy
I can't wait to read the next part! I'm so excited!
Please please please continue wonderful author anon!
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