Unfortunate [4a/?]
anonymous
December 7 2009, 19:32:08 UTC
“Lovino,” Antonio whined from the other side of the closet, which wasn't that far away. “Hey, Lovino?”
He could feel a leg poking his own, begging for attention and Lovino grumbled begrudgingly. “What now?”
“It's uncomfortable,” Antonio informed him, as if Lovino was unaware of the lack of soft things to lean onto in the room. “And cold,” another thing Lovino couldn't help but notice as well, with the night creeping in and common sense that assumed that there was no need to heat up a storage room for cleaning equipments. He would've loved to complain about these things too, but with him being part of the reason they were trapped in the first place (he shared the blame with grandpa, Feliciano, Potato-bastard, Gilbert, God and Antonio) Lovino felt like he had little right to complain, if only to avoid being reminded that it was most totally all his fault.
“What the hell do you want me to do about it,” he spat instead, his annoyance growing the more Antonio kept on talking. And Antonio talked. A lot.“Let me spoon you,” came the
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Unfortunate [8/?]
anonymous
December 15 2009, 19:19:29 UTC
Lovino stayed quiet for some time, thinking what there was to tell. Not that he would just open up at command, but he couldn't help it if Antonio's question made him think about it.
And really, even if he did start spilling all that was him, aside from how much he was not like his brother at all, there was little to tell.
“Lovino?” Antonio nudged Lovino's head with his cheek.
“I'm not supposed to talk to strangers,” he mumbled back, if not to change the subject, then to at least buy more time to think. (Grandpa's actual words had been something along the lines “It's a vast world out there, Lovino, one that could offer the beauty of friendship for those who dare to seek it. Now go, go outside and meet some people!”)
“You say that now?” It sounded like a disbelieving and somewhat amused eyebrow had been raised at him, but somehow he couldn't imagine that look on Antonio. Lovino didn't say anything to that, just kept to his quiet stubbornly, trusting Antonio to move on thanks to his short attention span
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Re: Unfortunate [8/?]
anonymous
December 16 2009, 03:36:24 UTC
Eat him.Imeanwhat?
You know Anon, I don't even care if you're going to write smut or not, I just love this fill exactly like it is. You're doing a wonderful job, the part where they use their hands to discover more about the other... actually, I loved how you managed to build their relationship into something so intimate when they have never seen the other. Wonderful, wonderful!
Rome's advice made me laugh out loud. I think he's a little desperate...
Unfortunate [9/?]
anonymous
December 19 2009, 16:41:37 UTC
Haaahahaa, I didn't rush at all, nope. 8D ... *Author!anon is slightly ashamed.* --
“I'm sorry, Lovino,” Antonio apologized what must've been for the hundredth time already. Lovino said nothing, but kept on counting, because sheep were lame and he wanted to sleep already. “I'm not a pervert, I swear.”
A hand came to touch his back, tracing along his spine in a soothing motion, but it only made him grow stiff, Antonio sensing this and withdrawing his wandering body part, only to resume to the action after a while had passed.
“I won't eat you, I promise,” the other tried again with a childish whine which left the impression that by 'eat' he meant cannibalism and not... well, something elseLovino on the other hand let out a disapproving grunt as he hugged himself tighter, lying on the floor after he had successfully escaped from Antonio's hold after his pervert-senses gave a red alert. The bells were constantly ringing in his head when Gilbert was near, but Antonio really managed to break the limit when he mentioned hunger and had
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Re: Unfortunate [9/?]
anonymous
December 20 2009, 23:00:59 UTC
Does this mean it's almost over, author-non? D: I'll miss this story, but I have to admit that I'm excited to see what'll happen once they finally...come out. /rimshot
Re: Unfortunate [9/?]
anonymous
December 21 2009, 16:15:07 UTC
*Un-shots above anon* Honey, I couldn't agree more!
love at first sight FTW!!!!!!!!!!!!
'Cause we all know this is the exact opposite of what Gilbo will be expecting...and, yeah, it'll make our inner-fangirl go "AWWWWWWW!" and 'SQUEEE!' and jump up and down in fangirl delight.
Re: Unfortunate [9/?]
anonymous
December 21 2009, 06:34:14 UTC
i just read this all today and ♥ ♥ ♥ i really want to write a detailed comment pointing out all the things i liked about this fic but i don't know where to start, so i'll just leave it at ILU ANON♥
Unfortunate [10a/?]
anonymous
December 21 2009, 19:09:53 UTC
I tried to resist, I did, but you weird wankers made me do it! So let them "come out." Pfft.Morning came crashing and quite unexpected, as Lovino had the displeasure to notice when the door burst in, hitting his leg painfully and thus jolting him awake
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Unfortunate [10b/?]
anonymous
December 21 2009, 19:18:03 UTC
He was almost on his feet, muscles aching to run, but before Lovino could perform the one thing he was excellent at, a hand came from behind him, clasping itself around his wrist. Before Lovino could stop himself, he automatically turned around, heart beating faster at being caught
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Re: Unfortunate [10b/?]
anonymous
December 22 2009, 02:08:31 UTC
This is just so cute! You know what's the thing I like about this fill the most? They really sound like teen-agers while being still IC, and it's so fun. Especially your Lovino, he's adorable.
If you feel like you're not done, by all means keep on writing, prompt or no prompt. I'll keep on reading for sure!
He could feel a leg poking his own, begging for attention and Lovino grumbled begrudgingly. “What now?”
“It's uncomfortable,” Antonio informed him, as if Lovino was unaware of the lack of soft things to lean onto in the room. “And cold,” another thing Lovino couldn't help but notice as well, with the night creeping in and common sense that assumed that there was no need to heat up a storage room for cleaning equipments. He would've loved to complain about these things too, but with him being part of the reason they were trapped in the first place (he shared the blame with grandpa, Feliciano, Potato-bastard, Gilbert, God and Antonio) Lovino felt like he had little right to complain, if only to avoid being reminded that it was most totally all his fault.
“What the hell do you want me to do about it,” he spat instead, his annoyance growing the more Antonio kept on talking. And Antonio talked. A lot.“Let me spoon you,” came the ( ... )
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And really, even if he did start spilling all that was him, aside from how much he was not like his brother at all, there was little to tell.
“Lovino?” Antonio nudged Lovino's head with his cheek.
“I'm not supposed to talk to strangers,” he mumbled back, if not to change the subject, then to at least buy more time to think. (Grandpa's actual words had been something along the lines “It's a vast world out there, Lovino, one that could offer the beauty of friendship for those who dare to seek it. Now go, go outside and meet some people!”)
“You say that now?” It sounded like a disbelieving and somewhat amused eyebrow had been raised at him, but somehow he couldn't imagine that look on Antonio. Lovino didn't say anything to that, just kept to his quiet stubbornly, trusting Antonio to move on thanks to his short attention span ( ... )
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You know Anon, I don't even care if you're going to write smut or not, I just love this fill exactly like it is. You're doing a wonderful job, the part where they use their hands to discover more about the other... actually, I loved how you managed to build their relationship into something so intimate when they have never seen the other. Wonderful, wonderful!
Rome's advice made me laugh out loud. I think he's a little desperate...
I can't wait to read the next part!
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... *Author!anon is slightly ashamed.*
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“I'm sorry, Lovino,” Antonio apologized what must've been for the hundredth time already. Lovino said nothing, but kept on counting, because sheep were lame and he wanted to sleep already. “I'm not a pervert, I swear.”
A hand came to touch his back, tracing along his spine in a soothing motion, but it only made him grow stiff, Antonio sensing this and withdrawing his wandering body part, only to resume to the action after a while had passed.
“I won't eat you, I promise,” the other tried again with a childish whine which left the impression that by 'eat' he meant cannibalism and not... well, something elseLovino on the other hand let out a disapproving grunt as he hugged himself tighter, lying on the floor after he had successfully escaped from Antonio's hold after his pervert-senses gave a red alert. The bells were constantly ringing in his head when Gilbert was near, but Antonio really managed to break the limit when he mentioned hunger and had ( ... )
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Great update as usual ♥
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/SHOT
Anon apologizes.
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love at first sight FTW!!!!!!!!!!!!
'Cause we all know this is the exact opposite of what Gilbo will be expecting...and, yeah, it'll make our inner-fangirl go "AWWWWWWW!" and 'SQUEEE!' and jump up and down in fangirl delight.
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i really want to write a detailed comment pointing out all the things i liked about this fic but i don't know where to start, so i'll just leave it at ILU ANON♥
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Pfft.Morning came crashing and quite unexpected, as Lovino had the displeasure to notice when the door burst in, hitting his leg painfully and thus jolting him awake ( ... )
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Please continue soon? Pretty please? I can't wait for more--
*shot for pressuring author!anon*
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It's just TOO awesome! I'm having trouble keeping my fingers off the F5 button!
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If you feel like you're not done, by all means keep on writing, prompt or no prompt. I'll keep on reading for sure!
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