Because spamano is hot and we all know it...
anonymous
November 12 2009, 21:57:06 UTC
Lovino is a prostitute (preferably from a brothel) and Antonio becomes a regular customer. It starts off all physical, but it eventually develops into love.
If author!anon prefers, Antonio could be prostitute and Lovino the customer. Though the alternative is preferred, either way will make OP very happy &hearts
So basically, hot smut with sprinklings of fluff? I need this like burning &hearts
BONUSES! - Once they develop a romantic relationship, Customer becomes jealous and protective over Prostitute, especially since some of his other customers can get pretty rough - Dirty talk during sex - Customer has a perfectly respectable career and social life, with Prostitute as his guilty pleasure - Have a Feli cameo. Not in the sex, just include him as Lovi's brother somehow. &hearts
Delectatio Morosa [1/5]
anonymous
November 21 2009, 18:36:36 UTC
As far as a john went, “Spain” wasn’t too bad. Lovino called him that because the man was obviously Spanish (those damn green eyes and black hair and love of red and gold). These sorts of guys didn’t want to be identified, because dirty little things like this ruined lives and careers and all that shit. Not that Lovino cared
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Delectatio Morosa [2/5]
anonymous
November 21 2009, 18:40:10 UTC
And Spain’s fingers were pretty damn good at that curl. Soon Lovino was shifting in his seat, unable to jerk his head away because those fingers had a firm grip and it wasn’t worth thinking about what would happen if that hair got pulled out- Through the pounding of his own heartbeat, he could dimly hear the john’s voice.
“I’m surprised you have that much blood.” And it wasn’t salacious, that was the infuriating bit. It was genuinely amused and maybe a little surprised.
“Shut up, bastard,” gritted Lovino, lost between the heat on his face and between his legs.
“Do you want me to make it feel better?” whispered Spain into Lovino’s ear. “Tell me what you want, bambino.” His finger continued to pinch and worry that single curl
( ... )
Delectatio Morosa [3/5]
anonymous
November 21 2009, 18:42:03 UTC
“I don’t want to hurt you,” Spain murmured almost soothingly.
“Do I look like I give a shit?”
Spain laughed, three fingers twisting around now but they were withdrawn obediently. Lovino fixed his eyes on the ceiling even as he heard the sound of the lube bottle being squeezed, a condom being opened.
“Look at me.”
And Lovino obeyed, meeting those stupid eyes. Those lying eyes, now hooded slightly but still bright enough to glint in the light of the room.
Spain murmured, “I want you to keep looking at me, bambino. Just do that for me, sí“As long as you get on to fucking me, bastard.” And he hated that he meant every word of that
( ... )
Delectatio Morosa [4/5]
anonymous
November 21 2009, 18:43:42 UTC
“I’ll make the pasta just the way you like it and oh, Lovino, you can meet my new friend Ludwig who I’ve been telling you about-”
The tic returned. “I’m not seeing the potato bastard.”
“But- but-!”
“I have to go. Bye.” He closed the phone over his brother’s yelped protests and set it back down.
Spain was stirring now and the sheets rustled on the bed. “Who was that?” his voice asked just a little thickly.
“Someone I know.” Lovino retreated to the window of the room to have a cigarette. Luckily this was allowable as part of his “persona.” Not pushing the matter, Spain padded from the bed to the bathroom to shower in the meantime; for some reason, he didn’t care for having company when getting cleaned up. That suited Lovino just fine as he stared blankly out the window into the too-bright night.
Feliciano’s voice and quiet remonstration lingered and brought unbidden memories to the surface, like stirring a pot of undisturbed minestrone.
Delectatio Morosa [5/5]
anonymous
November 21 2009, 18:45:01 UTC
Lovino was on his third cigarette when Spain came back out and got dressed again. The john came over to the window, pulling several bills from his wallet. Not payment; that would have been done up front. None of that kind of stuff here. Bonnefoy hated crassness in his place
( ... )
Re: Delectatio Morosa [5/5]
anonymous
November 21 2009, 23:36:39 UTC
I hate the fact that the kink meme is so low on commentors these days that a gorgeous fill like this hasn't got more than one comment.
This was really great. I'm not into this couple - I'm one of the whiny USUK-fans - but as I saw it was about prostituton, it triggered my interest anyway. And I'm glad it did! I like the mood, and how this odd relationship between them is being represented in its own beauty. That there's a background story for Lovino's actions just makes it so more loveable!
And the bringing in of other characters as a part of the univers = <3
Re: Delectatio Morosa [5/5]
anonymous
November 21 2009, 23:46:04 UTC
This is so, so, so lovely. I love the way you've captured their relationship like this, and the way you give a little taste of what lead Lovino to where he is now. I'd love to see more in this universe, but its also perfect as is. ♥
Re: Delectatio Morosa [5/5]
anonymous
November 22 2009, 01:12:57 UTC
I wasn't sure what to expect out of this - I've seen some very bad hooker AUs and some very good ones, and I'm glad that I decided to give this one a try.
I have to say that I really like the ending, although I really shouldn't call it an ending because it doesn't resolve the situation you've set up - because it very deliberately spells out Spain's connection (for the purposes of in-universe, I'll say that it could be romantic or it could be only sexual) to Romano, but only hints at what Romano's possible reactions are. (can you tell I would very much like to see a continuation)
if anything, he was too skinny to seem like a thug I kept trying to decide if that was supposed to be Prussia or Austria. I think I'm leaning to Prussia, since Austria seems too classy to be telling a kid directly to go sell himself.
“Gotta answer that,” mumbled Lovino,I have to say, the first time I read that I read it as them being in the middle of sex and Romano going, "Whoop, phone!" and taking the phone off the nightstand next to the bed. Reading
( ... )
Re: Delectatio Morosa [5/5]
anonymous
November 22 2009, 01:33:37 UTC
I take it that this is well-received then? -is as oblivious as Spain most days- The ending is a bit of a cop-out, sadly.
^^; Unfortunately, I'm kind of stuck on where to go from here. I have a handful of ideas, along with a sideplot involving Lovino's relationship with the brothel's masseuse (aka South Korea aka Yong-soo), but I can't quite get around to putting it all together. I might? I'd rather not make any promises.
The skinny man is just a random gangster. I was tempted to make him Gilbert, actually (you made a pretty good guess!), but it didn't seem right. As much of an asshole Prussia is, he doesn't have that deliberate sort of malice (the way I see him).
Re: Delectatio Morosa [5/5]
anonymous
November 22 2009, 02:29:02 UTC
-not the previous commenter-
I'm actually content with the open ending, but a continuation would be fantastic. I love the way you write for these characters. I appreciated the mentions you dropped of the other hookers, too. Short, but fitting.
Re: Delectatio Morosa [5/5]
anonymous
November 22 2009, 02:01:20 UTC
Oh my god anon. This is wonderful. And I'm not gonna lie, I'm a big north american brothers fan and reading that little bit about Matt and Al made me squee.
This went... way beyond my expectations. Seriously. I don't even know how to word my thanks b-because this was seriously honest-to-god FANTASTIC. You just... the characterization was beautiful, and I just adored the way you took their personalities, the way you fit them to this universe. The little details about Lovi's life and the other hookers. The way you made Antonio a totally bigshot guy in the end because that is just awesome and how they interacted and everythinggg. Like, seriously. EVERYTHING. A-And I'm just struck dead by how realistic this all seems, because... to be honest, I was afraid that someone would fill this with a bad imitation of a hookerverse, but. YOU MADE ALL THOSE WORRIES GO AWAY &hearts I didn't expect the little backstory bits and I was pleasantly surprised. I love how you incorporated Feli exactly the way I hoped, the way it was open-ended but still satisfying, and basically... this fill is perfect. Of course I think
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If author!anon prefers, Antonio could be prostitute and Lovino the customer. Though the alternative is preferred, either way will make OP very happy &hearts
So basically, hot smut with sprinklings of fluff? I need this like burning &hearts
BONUSES!
- Once they develop a romantic relationship, Customer becomes jealous and protective over Prostitute, especially since some of his other customers can get pretty rough
- Dirty talk during sex
- Customer has a perfectly respectable career and social life, with Prostitute as his guilty pleasure
- Have a Feli cameo. Not in the sex, just include him as Lovi's brother somehow. &hearts
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“I’m surprised you have that much blood.” And it wasn’t salacious, that was the infuriating bit. It was genuinely amused and maybe a little surprised.
“Shut up, bastard,” gritted Lovino, lost between the heat on his face and between his legs.
“Do you want me to make it feel better?” whispered Spain into Lovino’s ear. “Tell me what you want, bambino.” His finger continued to pinch and worry that single curl ( ... )
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“Do I look like I give a shit?”
Spain laughed, three fingers twisting around now but they were withdrawn obediently. Lovino fixed his eyes on the ceiling even as he heard the sound of the lube bottle being squeezed, a condom being opened.
“Look at me.”
And Lovino obeyed, meeting those stupid eyes. Those lying eyes, now hooded slightly but still bright enough to glint in the light of the room.
Spain murmured, “I want you to keep looking at me, bambino. Just do that for me, sí“As long as you get on to fucking me, bastard.” And he hated that he meant every word of that ( ... )
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The tic returned. “I’m not seeing the potato bastard.”
“But- but-!”
“I have to go. Bye.” He closed the phone over his brother’s yelped protests and set it back down.
Spain was stirring now and the sheets rustled on the bed. “Who was that?” his voice asked just a little thickly.
“Someone I know.” Lovino retreated to the window of the room to have a cigarette. Luckily this was allowable as part of his “persona.” Not pushing the matter, Spain padded from the bed to the bathroom to shower in the meantime; for some reason, he didn’t care for having company when getting cleaned up. That suited Lovino just fine as he stared blankly out the window into the too-bright night.
Feliciano’s voice and quiet remonstration lingered and brought unbidden memories to the surface, like stirring a pot of undisturbed minestrone.
“Feli, get back in the room ( ... )
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This was really great. I'm not into this couple - I'm one of the whiny USUK-fans - but as I saw it was about prostituton, it triggered my interest anyway. And I'm glad it did!
I like the mood, and how this odd relationship between them is being represented in its own beauty. That there's a background story for Lovino's actions just makes it so more loveable!
And the bringing in of other characters as a part of the univers = <3
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oh Lovi~~
recaptcha- yawning untimely.. hehe referring to spain sleeping are we..?
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I have to say that I really like the ending, although I really shouldn't call it an ending because it doesn't resolve the situation you've set up - because it very deliberately spells out Spain's connection (for the purposes of in-universe, I'll say that it could be romantic or it could be only sexual) to Romano, but only hints at what Romano's possible reactions are.
(can you tell I would very much like to see a continuation)
if anything, he was too skinny to seem like a thug
I kept trying to decide if that was supposed to be Prussia or Austria. I think I'm leaning to Prussia, since Austria seems too classy to be telling a kid directly to go sell himself.
“Gotta answer that,” mumbled Lovino,I have to say, the first time I read that I read it as them being in the middle of sex and Romano going, "Whoop, phone!" and taking the phone off the nightstand next to the bed. Reading ( ... )
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^^; Unfortunately, I'm kind of stuck on where to go from here. I have a handful of ideas, along with a sideplot involving Lovino's relationship with the brothel's masseuse (aka South Korea aka Yong-soo), but I can't quite get around to putting it all together. I might? I'd rather not make any promises.
The skinny man is just a random gangster. I was tempted to make him Gilbert, actually (you made a pretty good guess!), but it didn't seem right. As much of an asshole Prussia is, he doesn't have that deliberate sort of malice (the way I see him).
Ah, thank you for your remarks!
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I'm actually content with the open ending, but a continuation would be fantastic. I love the way you write for these characters.
I appreciated the mentions you dropped of the other hookers, too. Short, but fitting.
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kfdjkaf. i. i. i don't even.
I LOVE YOU TO BITS ;_________;
This went... way beyond my expectations. Seriously. I don't even know how to word my thanks b-because this was seriously honest-to-god FANTASTIC. You just... the characterization was beautiful, and I just adored the way you took their personalities, the way you fit them to this universe. The little details about Lovi's life and the other hookers. The way you made Antonio a totally bigshot guy in the end because that is just awesome and how they interacted and everythinggg. Like, seriously. EVERYTHING. A-And I'm just struck dead by how realistic this all seems, because... to be honest, I was afraid that someone would fill this with a bad imitation of a hookerverse, but. YOU MADE ALL THOSE WORRIES GO AWAY &hearts I didn't expect the little backstory bits and I was pleasantly surprised. I love how you incorporated Feli exactly the way I hoped, the way it was open-ended but still satisfying, and basically... this fill is perfect. Of course I think ( ... )
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