I want a haunting AU with America and England, preferably with America as the ghost. Human names are the only thing that would make sense to me in this setting and I want it to be creepy!
Please anons? Please, please?? I want angst, I want creepiness, I want tragedy! ...Though a happy closure ending would be appreciated too. >>
Haunting You (1a/?)
anonymous
August 6 2009, 04:31:40 UTC
On this like America on shiny weapons toys. Like promised. *sigh* Did not expect this to become a multi-part fill, but, oh well. I'll try to update often.
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The year is 1783 Anno Domini and England's heart is heavy with regrets
( ... )
Re: Haunting You (1b/?)
anonymous
August 6 2009, 10:34:50 UTC
Whoa! This seriously creeped me out. Now I have goosebumps all over my body. Damn baby!America. Just a while ago I was thinking of how cute you are... ):
Re: Haunting You (2a/?)
anonymous
August 9 2009, 02:13:08 UTC
When England finally woke up, he was greeted by cold air assaulting his his body.
It was another rainy day in London, and an opened shutter explained the chill. With a scowl, England swung out of bed and shut it. He vowed to remember to keep it closed next time. The cold air was playing tricks on his mind, giving him strange dreams of a child Amer-ghost.
He absentmindedly rubbed at his bandaged arms, only to stop in confusion.
“When did I...” England muttered, looking at the white linen covering his wounded limbs. He shrugged. He must have simply forgotten about taking care of the cuts.
There was a tray on his bedside table, loaded with scones and a cold pot of tea. It was another thing he must have forgotten about. Grumbling to himself, he picked up the tray and headed down to the kitchen to clean it up. As he walked, England thoughtlessly picked up a scone and bit into it.
Blueberry. Tastier (actually, much tastier) than his usual creations. Pity he had forgotten making them. He rather would like to duplicate the recipe
( ... )
Re: Haunting You (2b/?)
anonymous
August 9 2009, 02:14:38 UTC
England shook his head, “But America is alive.”
The child smirked, the expression flickering wrongly on that sweet face.
“Not to you.”
Then, the hall began to darken oddly, strange shadows etching themselves on the wall. The black magic was so thick, England could taste it in the air. Cold fear forcibly wormed its way into his head against his commands. The island Nation heard himself let out a strange, keening whimper.
“No...stay away,” England groaned, recognizing what what happening. His words fell on deaf ears.
America frowned, tears threatening to spill from his eyes, “Don't you like me anymore, Iggy?”
“I...I,” England felt his mouth clog. The thick darkness in the room was muddling the island Nation's head. His legs buckled and he slid to the floor.
Suddenly, America was there, his chubby hands fisted in the fabric of England's shirt. The temperature in the room dropped so low England could see his panted breath. America tilted his head to one side, his lips pursed in contemplation
( ... )
Re: Haunting You (CH 2 Notes/?)
anonymous
August 9 2009, 02:15:28 UTC
notes:
Blueberries: Blueberries are native to Northern America and aren't really grown that much in the UK, especially back then. Thus, England's confusion at tasting them.
Salt: salt rings are, according to legend, one of the best ways to keep out the supernatural, especially ghosts.
Ghost!America and his shadows: I'm making America something like a wraith or a poltergeist. Certain types of ghosts have the ability to affect mortals' emotions, in particular increasing the sense of fear which is what America is doing to England here. This is why England feels like he can't control his emotions. He really can't. It's also why he feels better once he's in the salt ring since the salt is negating America's influence. The black shadows toddling after America like puppies are an aspect of this power. Some ghosts can also physically harm the the living. Of course the ghosts with those kinds of abilities are generally not nice.
This just keeps getting better! The way America's ghost switches between sinister affection and childish love is marvelous! kfjghldkjfghdsjkgh I can't wait to read more!
Re: Haunting You (2b/?)
anonymous
August 11 2009, 08:01:41 UTC
*faps to this fic
Holy Creeper Baby America! An update~ Now I can't unsee the image of America staring at England from the outside of the window...
Gotta to love the details! The blueberries, the salt ring (now I'm inspired to always bring salt with me; who knows when something's gonna pop out), the shadows, wraith!America's effect on England, the blood, everything! Oh, don't stop, writer of creepy fics!anon~
I keep imagining England putting wards around his house to make it ghost!America-proof but neglects to remember that America is still alive. It's inevitable: He's gonna be bothered by America whatever he does. :3
Re: Haunting You (3a/?)
anonymous
August 13 2009, 00:20:13 UTC
After that last incident with America, it became a daily ritual for England to pour a ring of salt around his bed before going to sleep. He would have surrounded the whole house (and inscribed a few other nasty spells on the walls, as well) but his fairies wouldn't stand for that. Still, it was enough. For days, months, years, America's ghost stays away. Every now and then, from the corner of his eye, England swore he sometimes saw spidery shadows creep across the wall or spied blue eyes peek out at him in a mirror. But whenever he turned to look, nothing was ever there
( ... )
Re: Haunting You (3b/?)
anonymous
August 13 2009, 00:22:27 UTC
In the midst of all the pillaging and burning, England found himself separated from Canada and the rest of his troops. He was unsure on how it happened. One moment he was with the others, then suddenly he was standing in a darkened alley by himself
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Please anons? Please, please?? I want angst, I want creepiness, I want tragedy! ...Though a happy closure ending would be appreciated too. >>
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The year is 1783 Anno Domini and England's heart is heavy with regrets ( ... )
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*a stalker from your serial killer fill*
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The best thing it that this was totally not what I was expecting and it's always better that way!! I can't wait, truly can't wait, for more.
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CONTINUE! <3
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It was another rainy day in London, and an opened shutter explained the chill. With a scowl, England swung out of bed and shut it. He vowed to remember to keep it closed next time. The cold air was playing tricks on his mind, giving him strange dreams of a child Amer-ghost.
He absentmindedly rubbed at his bandaged arms, only to stop in confusion.
“When did I...” England muttered, looking at the white linen covering his wounded limbs. He shrugged. He must have simply forgotten about taking care of the cuts.
There was a tray on his bedside table, loaded with scones and a cold pot of tea. It was another thing he must have forgotten about. Grumbling to himself, he picked up the tray and headed down to the kitchen to clean it up. As he walked, England thoughtlessly picked up a scone and bit into it.
Blueberry. Tastier (actually, much tastier) than his usual creations. Pity he had forgotten making them. He rather would like to duplicate the recipe ( ... )
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The child smirked, the expression flickering wrongly on that sweet face.
“Not to you.”
Then, the hall began to darken oddly, strange shadows etching themselves on the wall. The black magic was so thick, England could taste it in the air. Cold fear forcibly wormed its way into his head against his commands. The island Nation heard himself let out a strange, keening whimper.
“No...stay away,” England groaned, recognizing what what happening. His words fell on deaf ears.
America frowned, tears threatening to spill from his eyes, “Don't you like me anymore, Iggy?”
“I...I,” England felt his mouth clog. The thick darkness in the room was muddling the island Nation's head. His legs buckled and he slid to the floor.
Suddenly, America was there, his chubby hands fisted in the fabric of England's shirt. The temperature in the room dropped so low England could see his panted breath. America tilted his head to one side, his lips pursed in contemplation ( ... )
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Blueberries: Blueberries are native to Northern America and aren't really grown that much in the UK, especially back then. Thus, England's confusion at tasting them.
Salt: salt rings are, according to legend, one of the best ways to keep out the supernatural, especially ghosts.
Ghost!America and his shadows: I'm making America something like a wraith or a poltergeist. Certain types of ghosts have the ability to affect mortals' emotions, in particular increasing the sense of fear which is what America is doing to England here. This is why England feels like he can't control his emotions. He really can't. It's also why he feels better once he's in the salt ring since the salt is negating America's influence. The black shadows toddling after America like puppies are an aspect of this power. Some ghosts can also physically harm the the living. Of course the ghosts with those kinds of abilities are generally not nice.
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This nonOp!anon really want to hug you for how chilling this fill is. Keep this up, please?
reChaptcha says: ment jugular. will America go for his neck next?
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This just keeps getting better! The way America's ghost switches between sinister affection and childish love is marvelous! kfjghldkjfghdsjkgh I can't wait to read more!
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Phew! Thank goodness...it was hard finding that perfect balance between cuteness and evil. Bipolar!America is bipolar! >.<
Glad you're liking it so far OP~!
Is it bad that I'm really, really enjoying doing this fill to the point that evil!baby!America is fast becoming my number 1 kink?
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Holy Creeper Baby America! An update~ Now I can't unsee the image of America staring at England from the outside of the window...
Gotta to love the details! The blueberries, the salt ring (now I'm inspired to always bring salt with me; who knows when something's gonna pop out), the shadows, wraith!America's effect on England, the blood, everything! Oh, don't stop, writer of creepy fics!anon~
I keep imagining England putting wards around his house to make it ghost!America-proof but neglects to remember that America is still alive. It's inevitable: He's gonna be bothered by America whatever he does. :3
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