[Axis Powers Hetalia, America/England: Alfred Jones and the Lost City of Gold 2/?]

[herolessons]

Title: Alfred Jones and the Lost City of Gold 2/? [FF.Net Link] [ Previous Chapters]
Fandom: Axis Powers Hetalia
Genre: Action/Adventure/Romance/FLUFF
Rating: PG-13 (language, thanks Tony)
Characters/Pairing: America/England, Poland/Lithuania, Tony
Word Count: 3,088
Summary: Sequel to Alfred Jones and the Curse of the Pharaoh. America and England

Comments

[nutburger]

Yay! I've been waiting for a new chapter!

The Lithuania and Poland part was cuuuute! Their friendship with Tony is just so sweet.~

Geez, America and England go on adventures like this all the time, huh? I'm surprised they haven't gotten killed yet XD. Ahhh what's going to happen next?! I can't wait to find out!

[abarero]

I'm glad to hear it!

Oh I love Tony's strange friendship/infatuation with Lithuania. And I just love the idea of him and Poland hitting it off. XD

Aha. They're lucky that as nations it takes a lot more to hurt them than it does normal humans. They've probably gotten into some pretty nasty scrapes before and been able to pretty much shrug it off.

Thanks again for commenting! I always appreciate it :)

[sakuratsukikage]

I loved this chapter so ridiculously much. I have a thing for sequences like this anyway, where two people (especially in a pairing), both go through injury and danger and still are both there for each other all the way. This chapter was absolutely the best example of it ever, though, seriously. I love it so much--I think it might be one of my favorite things of yours so far, honestly, and you know I don't say that lightly. I just love all of it--the beginning with Poland and Liet and Tony (oh, Tony--your characterization of him is seriously amazing, and I was laughing to myself through that entire section). And then you moved on to the pulse-pounding action, and I was totally pulled in even more. I could see everything you described so clearly, and just . . . the whole thing made me squee and took my breath away, seriously. Like this section:

“America!” He yelled out hoarsely, his fingers aching to have more than a small patch of cloth holding him safe, but knowing it was not possible to hold him with more than one hand while

[abarero]

I'm really glad to hear how much that sequence worked for you! I enjoy that sort of thing as well- in which two characters just have to keep supporting each other. It's always such a great dynamic. I'm also pleased to hear that you're enjoying Tony! He's going to play an important role in this story, so I always get excited when people are enjoying his role so far. XD

And I'm super glad the action reads all right. It's always so tricky to get the images of the scene in my head into words that I feel convey everything I envision. So to hear that a it works for you is wonderful for me.

Oh yes, England is definitely sensing a hint of the danger to come. And as you noted, it's something America can't sense, which adds a whole other level of problems to their situation.

As always, thank you for commenting and supporting me on this story! :)

[ottful]

Lovelovelovelovelovelove <33

I was waiting for this super epic beginning after that cliffhanger, but I truly enjoyed the part about Liet and Poland and Tony, and was on the edge of my seat for the whole following section. They never get through an adventure unscathed, but their affection and care for each other's well-being just overwhelms me with cute <3

So, so wonderful. And that last bit has me anxious for the next installment! Keep up the amazing work, as always! <3

[abarero]

I'm very glad to hear you're enjoying it! Even if there's some slower moments (like Tony's scene here with Poland and Lithuania) mixed in with the action, I'm always glad to hear both worked for people :)

Thank you again for commenting~! :)

[abarero]

No spoilers from me, but needless to say, Tony and England are going to have to deal with each more than they'd probably like throughout the course of this. Tony cares about America far too much to just let England fuss over him all the time XD

I'm glad to hear you enjoyed their fussing on each other. And aha, fretting is exactly what England's doing regarding this magic too, so... XD

Thank you again for commenting! I'm always glad to receive your feedback :)

[belarusxrussia]

It was ssooooo awesome. I'm glad that i ran into the secound one and then i found the first one so no suspence there. It was i absolutly love the relationship between england and america.
"The fucking limy" It's horrible but i love that line
Poland and lithuania Are soooo cute together. I couldn't stop laughing at the
"At the sound of Poland’s giggles and Lithuania’s half-hearted “Poland, stop it!” amidst his own laughter" Haha i loved it.

I just can't get over how much i love how you put America and england together.

Amazing job and hurry up with the next installment <333333 Can't wait.

[abarero]

I'm so glad to hear that you're enjoying it!

And the next installment is up now~ <3