[Axis Powers Hetalia, America/England: Alfred Jones and the Lost City of Gold 2/?]

[herolessons]

Title: Alfred Jones and the Lost City of Gold 2/? [FF.Net Link] [ Previous Chapters]
Fandom: Axis Powers Hetalia
Genre: Action/Adventure/Romance/FLUFF
Rating: PG-13 (language, thanks Tony)
Characters/Pairing: America/England, Poland/Lithuania, Tony
Word Count: 3,088
Summary: Sequel to Alfred Jones and the Curse of the Pharaoh. America and England

Comments

[abarero]

Thank you very much for commenting!

The next part is up now :)

[sephydark]

Oh, those two. I love England's rescue, and the way America tries to protect him when he falls. And England grabbing the knife by the blade so that he wouldn't hurt America was wonderful.

America and England are so adorable fussing over each other's injuries like that. And America is totally right; England is a lot like Tony when it comes to being protective of America. Now I'm wondering what it would be like if those two set aside their differences for him.

An unresponsive radio? Creepy magic? On top of the injuries they already have, this doesn't sound good for America and England...

[abarero]

America and England are both so protective of each other and I'm glad to hear that worked for you. :)

Now I'm wondering what it would be like if those two set aside their differences for him.

Needless to say, their similar love and protectiveness over America is going to be important to this story. I won't say more, but...you'll be seeing more about Tony and England throughout XD

Thanks again as always for commenting! I really appreciate it :)

[abarero]

I hope I can make you like him even more by the time this story is over :)

Glad you're enjoying it :)

[socialholic]

Sfkdlsj eeeeeh Lithuania and Poland >u< !! They're so awesome, I love your Poland so much, with all the pink luggage and lipgloss! And oh God the scarf :'D it must look rather hilarious (but awesome) on Tony. Pffft and why can I imagine so well Lithuania, Poland and Tony having a bubble bath party in America's bathtub.

Of course, the bubbles have to be pink too.

Slfdkj haha :'DD so England and Tony do have some kind of connection between them since England can so well feel it when Tony is warning him like that! Well, it figures, really, as Tony is an alien and England speaks to fairies and such so.. there HAS to be some sort of supernatural aura in both of them.

Sdfklsjl OH GOD that part where they're up in the air and England is trying to cut the cords of America's parachute is SO EXCITING *u*. One reason I really, really love your adventure fics is because they're so exciting and you are just so amazing at writing those exciting scenes, describing their feelings and what is happening around them without it being incoherent as

[abarero]

I'm so pleased you enjoyed the scene with Poland, Lithuania and Tony. I really have fun writing Poland, so I'm glad his pinkness works for you~!

I've always wondered why we see Tony talking into England's mind but not America's, and I thought the same. Maybe it's England's connection with the magical world that makes himself more open to Tony's telepathy?

One reason I really, really love your adventure fics is because they're so exciting and you are just so amazing at writing those exciting scenes, describing their feelings and what is happening around them without it being incoherent as there's always so many things happening at once.I am SO so glad to hear this! I always have a tricky time getting how I picture a scene playing out in my mind into words sometimes because there's so much going on and I want it to be clear in the words all that is happening. So I'm very pleased to hear that it works so well for you

[aoi_aka]

Holy cow! Inca land can bite you in the ass. I can't wait to see what sort of power is lurking in the land that is sending England those evil/bad vibes. XD

[abarero]

Thank you for commenting!

Aha yes, you have to watch out for what it is England is sensing. Next chapter is up now :)