[Fic] Shattered.

[helzfyah]

Title: Shattered 1/1

Author: helzfyah

Pairing: YooSu

Rating:  PG-13; angsty.

A/N: Inspired by sad, not-so-love songs. I need to bury my angst monster before working on my crack Jaepi.

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“Going out tonight?” Jaejoong asks, leaning against the bathroom door as he watches Yoochun splash on after-shave. Yoochun checks his appearance in

Comments

[helzfyah]

That's my fave line, right there.

And YooSu *pets* they make me either angsty or high. Today it was angsty. What a way to get introduced to OTP, lol.

Glad you enjoyed it <3333

[helzfyah]

I'm a crack fiend - so why are all my fics turning out all angsty?

*is baffled*

[rain_streaked]

...you mentioned Jaepi. Jaepi. As in... Jaejoong and Pi? Yamapi? Yamashita Tomohisa, of JE fame?

let me have your babies omg

Yoochun-sshi, you heartbreaker. I could totally see Junsu wrapped up in a bathrobe sitting by the window. ;__; Oh, and Jaejoong's not-quite interference in the beginning and end was a nice touch. ♥ Lol, I sort of wish there had been Jaejoong and Junsu interaction.

[helzfyah]

Yes - JaePi. Exactly the Pi you're thinking about.

OMG i should be SHOT. But Pi is so hot and ghei and I watched too much of Daite Senorita one night and now i'm watching Nobuta and I think he's on CRACK and they're lying about the soy milk and him with Jae is just pretty dark-haired loveliness and i don't know what I'm doing!

Can they be fic babies cuz I don't think i have the right equipment for real babies and my mommy would kill me for having kids before I finish Uni WTF

lol - I almost put clothes on Su. I was like: you're having serious conversations and staring people down and you're NAKED. But I liked the bathrobe, so it stayed :) And JaeSu interaction - I never even thought of that, i fail! *is shot*. But then there might have been tears and i was trying to stay away from water works.

I'm glad you enjoyed it!

[eyecatcher_101]

i hurt for the both of them ;_;

that was really good! ♥

[helzfyah]

I'm glad you enjoyed it!
&heearts;

[faricsyung]

it's within grasp and they both wanted it.. but neither have enough will to work it. ahh, so angsty. so hurting. T_T;;;

thanks for the good read. <3

[helzfyah]

Your Welcome!

*hearts; Thanks for reading, and glad you enjoyed it.

[bellasurus]

NOT ENOUGH. THAT WAS SO NOT AN ENDING ToT

It was a pretty take on a well-used plot - the dialogue was spot-on and i liked how you didn't make junsu the weak fragile one but made him strong and well, sad at the same time *_* lovely thing, but it could use a better ending >D

JAEPI FTW!

[helzfyah]

I FAIL at endings Bel I told you ^________^.

I shouldn't listen to sad songs at ALL. It was going all yunjae-ish in my head, but then I was all NO: no more angstifying Jae - Su, come over here, I haven't tortured you yet. And then he wanted to cry and I had to pinch him to get him to stop and Chun was being all stuuuuupid.

and when I was in the mall i had an ending all nicely mapped, but by the time I got home I FORGOT most of it *sob* Stupid Wal-Mart Lines

JaePi comes up next!!!!

Thank you Miss Bel *hugs*

[bellasurus]

well, i fail at endings too XDD;; but i could see this going into a multi-chap. hehehe.

ahh, i don't even listen to sad songs at all! XDDDD. hehe. yunjae - NO, i'm glad you didn't. *has been reading too many tortured!jae chinese fics* hehe. and yay for susu not crying although - you pinched him? ToT

hehehehe it's like that *hugs* it's okay. it was a nice fic still ^^

YAY JAEPI *_*

*huggles back*

[helzfyah]

I know it has the multi-chap feel. But I dont know if I can sustain an entire yooSu fic, or a multi-chap though. But i kinda want to write it... we'll see if I get itchy enough to do it ^__*

ANd I only pinched him a little bit. Not too hard :p