[Fic] Shattered.

Feb 18, 2007 02:27

Title: Shattered 1/1

Author: helzfyah

Pairing: YooSu

Rating:  PG-13; angsty.

A/N: Inspired by sad, not-so-love songs. I need to bury my angst monster before working on my crack Jaepi.

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“Going out tonight?” Jaejoong asks, leaning against the bathroom door as he watches Yoochun splash on after-shave. Yoochun checks his appearance in ( Read more... )

fic: shattered, dbsk, yoosu, fic

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anonymous February 18 2007, 15:51:55 UTC
I love your choice in words! ^__^ It's beautiful in an angsty way. [o_o??]

>____< I can just imagine Junsu or Chunnie curling themselfs in an armchair. Bwee~ It's a depressing sight~~

^^ I like it~~ ^___^

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chottoipuku February 18 2007, 15:53:03 UTC
^^;;; Heh~ Sorry, I realized I wasn't logged in~

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helzfyah February 18 2007, 16:19:44 UTC
Absolutely no problem *hands out cookies*

Thanks for reading - The armchair was one of my fave parts too :)

Glad you enjoyed it!

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thisistony February 18 2007, 16:31:12 UTC
Oh dear, I'm afraid I can't keep my promise yet, as I've only had four hours of sleep @_@

But let's see, YooChun recovers by later that day and continues on as he has been, but obviously there's no JunSu to come back to. JunSu, on the other hand is still with HyukJae and SM thinks that JunSu is really sick and that's why he "can't appear" with TVXQ. Jae lied and told management that Susubee got the flu and went underground to spend time with his family.

Once JunSu finally comes back to the TVXQ apartment, it's already late at night and YooChun's already gone out for the night. When he comes back, though, something strange happens. He gives in to his urge to shower and JunSu, still awake, watches YooChun come back into their room shirtless before he forgot something for his shower...

But when YooChun leaves, the ambient light from the bathroom, illuminates the hideous new bruises that cover YooChun in every spot the camera can't see.

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helzfyah February 18 2007, 17:09:50 UTC
Dude - you're brilliant with only 4 hours of sleep. I love that idea there, but... i dont get the bruises *is slow*

Now - go back to bed and feel better.

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thisistony February 18 2007, 17:11:39 UTC
*cough* JunSu wasn't waiting for YooChun at home and people at the club don't like YooChun for his heart.

Oh, I'm OK, I just stayed up until 4 reading some new books XD

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helzfyah February 18 2007, 17:52:15 UTC
Oh... I fail, obviously.

And new books - yum.

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kuro_jashin February 18 2007, 18:10:32 UTC
;______________________________________;

CHUNNIE!!! GO AFTER HIM!!!! *Cries*

I really loved this fic. ^^ It was a very good angst Yoosu. They're also my second favorite OTP. ^^

^^ Hiya btw! I'm Brianne! I saw your name is Bri, and you're the first other person interested in JE and SM with a name like mine. ^^ yey!

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helzfyah February 18 2007, 19:12:08 UTC
Oh -I'm glad you liked it :)

And HI! I've never met another Brianne, it's a fairly odd name where I come from. And I'm just getting interested in JE, I don't know much about them. But I'm in love with Yamapi... yum.

Nice to meet ya!

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smellsliketheta February 18 2007, 21:51:53 UTC
Owww :( I pain for both of them..
“I can’t love you, Junsu, not the way you need me to. I don’t have the strength for it.”

That is sad and beautiful line.

Of course in my head I'm also rooting for a happy ending (Yoosu is my OTP 8D) but... that would take awake the heart-wrenching beauty that is angst.

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helzfyah February 18 2007, 22:39:07 UTC
I have no idea why all my muses have been so angsty lately...

But I'm glad you liked it even with the lack of happy ending.

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one_sour_cookie February 18 2007, 23:05:59 UTC
OMG! I LOVE IT!!! ITs so sad tho...

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helzfyah February 19 2007, 18:39:49 UTC
Oh - thank you for reading, and I'm glad you enjoyed it <3

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