[Fic] Shattered.

[helzfyah]

Title: Shattered 1/1

Author: helzfyah

Pairing: YooSu

Rating:  PG-13; angsty.

A/N: Inspired by sad, not-so-love songs. I need to bury my angst monster before working on my crack Jaepi.

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“Going out tonight?” Jaejoong asks, leaning against the bathroom door as he watches Yoochun splash on after-shave. Yoochun checks his appearance in

Comments

[bellasurus]

NOT ENOUGH. THAT WAS SO NOT AN ENDING ToT

It was a pretty take on a well-used plot - the dialogue was spot-on and i liked how you didn't make junsu the weak fragile one but made him strong and well, sad at the same time *_* lovely thing, but it could use a better ending >D

JAEPI FTW!

[helzfyah]

I FAIL at endings Bel I told you ^________^.

I shouldn't listen to sad songs at ALL. It was going all yunjae-ish in my head, but then I was all NO: no more angstifying Jae - Su, come over here, I haven't tortured you yet. And then he wanted to cry and I had to pinch him to get him to stop and Chun was being all stuuuuupid.

and when I was in the mall i had an ending all nicely mapped, but by the time I got home I FORGOT most of it *sob* Stupid Wal-Mart Lines

JaePi comes up next!!!!

Thank you Miss Bel *hugs*

[bellasurus]

well, i fail at endings too XDD;; but i could see this going into a multi-chap. hehehe.

ahh, i don't even listen to sad songs at all! XDDDD. hehe. yunjae - NO, i'm glad you didn't. *has been reading too many tortured!jae chinese fics* hehe. and yay for susu not crying although - you pinched him? ToT

hehehehe it's like that *hugs* it's okay. it was a nice fic still ^^

YAY JAEPI *_*

*huggles back*

[helzfyah]

I know it has the multi-chap feel. But I dont know if I can sustain an entire yooSu fic, or a multi-chap though. But i kinda want to write it... we'll see if I get itchy enough to do it ^__*

ANd I only pinched him a little bit. Not too hard :p

[bellasurus]

heh, this is like...a prologue >D but the rest of the fic will be hard, yeah :x do it when you get the inspiration XDDD *pokes you to MSN*

ah, but the question of WHERE you pinched him must be asked then >DD