[FIC] All The Pins and The Pricks 2/??

May 06, 2008 20:21

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jaeho, apap, fic

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kattan69 May 6 2008, 15:15:53 UTC
That's OK...I find this chapter not bad. At least we know how Jae survive..luckily he got Su around to help him..better than being alone.

So the next chapter will show Yunho coming back. Wonder what kind of circumstance will they meet. Same office building? Can't wait for the next update. Pls do continue!

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hell_angel_v2 May 7 2008, 00:13:44 UTC
thanks! i dunno why i don't like thius chap, but i was really tired and it was getting late and the emoticons took so much work LOL

OMG are you psychic? or is it that predictable? *goes to rewrite whole plotline* LOL kidding! thanks for reading!

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kattan69 May 7 2008, 01:09:21 UTC
Yes...you can't escape the sharp eyes (or avid readers like me)...we know what kind of plot you are getting...don't worry, we are just kidding.

Actually it is quite obvious as Jae don't really go out except for works. And the only place Yunho will see him if he is in the same building. What I want to know is why Yunho is back with vengeance (from your summary).

Anyway, pls do update soon...this story will be getting angst when these two meet.

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reveriepooh May 6 2008, 15:38:42 UTC
touching...... can't wait to read the part when Yunho knows about his son.... and the betrayal...

pls continue.....*saying humbly

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hell_angel_v2 May 7 2008, 00:15:02 UTC
will post next chapter soon, when my back stops aching. LOL i sound like my grandmother!

thanks for reading!

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wintersplash May 6 2008, 16:20:14 UTC
i love this fic!! is yunho mad at Jaejoong?? Does Yunho know he has a son with Jaejoong? Why will he come back??so many questions in my head!

please update soon!:P

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hell_angel_v2 May 7 2008, 00:16:35 UTC
surprise, the fic loves you, too! ;P your questions will be answered if you keep reading, haha, so please do! ♥♥♥

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moon1084 May 6 2008, 16:57:05 UTC
its scary how much they really look alike. only him and inhwan looked like yunho and junsu. others didnt really resemble them. ok i dont know why you hate this chap. i really liked it. it really did show what jae is going thru and how he feels for yunho when he sees moonbin. your next chap should involve yunho coming back but maybe not knowing about moonbin. oh i cant for it. update fast please.

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hell_angel_v2 May 7 2008, 00:20:20 UTC
i know! even moonbin's face shape is similar to yunho! illegitimate child? lol kidding! and i was really going to use inhwan cuz i think he's the cutest and i love him just that much, but then yunho might think its su's child. OMG incest! haha!

and r u psychic? cuz it looks like you already know what will happen so you don't need to read the next chapter. LOL i take that back!! please continue reading! will post next chapter when my back stops aching, so pray for me! ;P

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moon1084 May 7 2008, 00:49:26 UTC
oh dont worry boo. even if i get whats gonna happen i am gonna read this fic. i can't wait for yunho's revenge. its going to be wonferful. my poor jaeho had to suffer.

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moon1084 May 7 2008, 00:57:41 UTC
suggestive scene of them they finally meet again:

ok like when they meet, yunho doesnt know abt moonbin and when he is searching for jae's house, he sees jae at some market (or maybe that bakery you mentioned) and they make eye connection and jae drops whatever is in his hands and gets cut and then yunho see's moonbin run up behind jae's legs and tell him, "umma your so clusmy, you have to be more careful" and yunho whispers like umma and then he points to himself and says or words with his lips appa and jae just nods. (btw they are still at a distance)

ohmyjaeho! aam i too corny? you dont have to use it. i am just totally getting into this story. update quickly

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nani_mitsukai_1 May 6 2008, 16:57:19 UTC
That was really good! ^-^

I like how Moonbin is so similar to Yunho, and how Moonbin is the bain of Junsu's existence! ^-^!

I wonder how Yunjae will meet?...I love surprises! ^-^

I will wait patiently for an update! ^-^

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hell_angel_v2 May 7 2008, 00:22:57 UTC
aw, i'm glad you like it!! ♥♥♥ i like making su suffer, and what better way than a bratty kid right? lol

yes, please wait patiently! cuz my back is aching and i need to rest... T^T

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nani_mitsukai_1 May 8 2008, 19:25:51 UTC
Yeah lol Bratty kids are the least physically painful...yet most nerve grinding way of making characters suffer! Brilliant! ^-^

Your back hurts?
I hope it get's better soon, it must be very painful!

Don't worry, just take care of your health first, I will wait very patiently! ^-^

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hell_angel_v2 May 8 2008, 23:29:45 UTC
haha mental torture is the best!! muhahaha!

anyway, the back pain's not so bad. don't worry ^-^

chapter 2 is up, haven'tyou seen? *goes to check the poll* nope, don't see you there. anyway, just check my journal out, if you wanna read it already :D

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