[FIC] All The Pins and The Pricks 2/??

May 06, 2008 20:21

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jaeho, apap, fic

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moon1084 May 6 2008, 16:57:05 UTC
its scary how much they really look alike. only him and inhwan looked like yunho and junsu. others didnt really resemble them. ok i dont know why you hate this chap. i really liked it. it really did show what jae is going thru and how he feels for yunho when he sees moonbin. your next chap should involve yunho coming back but maybe not knowing about moonbin. oh i cant for it. update fast please.

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hell_angel_v2 May 7 2008, 00:20:20 UTC
i know! even moonbin's face shape is similar to yunho! illegitimate child? lol kidding! and i was really going to use inhwan cuz i think he's the cutest and i love him just that much, but then yunho might think its su's child. OMG incest! haha!

and r u psychic? cuz it looks like you already know what will happen so you don't need to read the next chapter. LOL i take that back!! please continue reading! will post next chapter when my back stops aching, so pray for me! ;P

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moon1084 May 7 2008, 00:49:26 UTC
oh dont worry boo. even if i get whats gonna happen i am gonna read this fic. i can't wait for yunho's revenge. its going to be wonferful. my poor jaeho had to suffer.

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moon1084 May 7 2008, 00:57:41 UTC
suggestive scene of them they finally meet again:

ok like when they meet, yunho doesnt know abt moonbin and when he is searching for jae's house, he sees jae at some market (or maybe that bakery you mentioned) and they make eye connection and jae drops whatever is in his hands and gets cut and then yunho see's moonbin run up behind jae's legs and tell him, "umma your so clusmy, you have to be more careful" and yunho whispers like umma and then he points to himself and says or words with his lips appa and jae just nods. (btw they are still at a distance)

ohmyjaeho! aam i too corny? you dont have to use it. i am just totally getting into this story. update quickly

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hell_angel_v2 May 7 2008, 01:12:52 UTC
i already have a plotline on how they'll meet again, but mind if i use it if i ever write another mpreg fic? ^_^

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moon1084 May 7 2008, 03:04:41 UTC
not at all! i would be honored

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hell_angel_v2 May 7 2008, 01:11:38 UTC
yes you should! or else i'll find you and bite you! XD kidding!

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moon1084 May 7 2008, 03:05:22 UTC
i like biting. its kinky

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