Team EWE

May 08, 2008 08:11

This story has been disqualified due to unsportsmanlike conduct by its author including wanking while under sock.

Disqualified )

prompt: temperance, nc-17, round i, fic, team ewe

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sesheta_66 May 8 2008, 13:36:06 UTC
Soooooo much fun! I absolutely love Narcissa in this. And Harry? I thought it was awesome that right from the outset he called Narcissa on her attempted manipulation. There are so many outwardly humorous lines in this, but a few of the ones that really got me were:

Yeah. Yeah, I can see that. Don't be offended, but I think you might just be scarier than Voldemort ever was. Scary, indeed.

Harry shuddered as Draco's lips brushed against his Adam's apple and he pulled on Draco's hair, forcing his head up so Harry could taste that sarcastic mouth again. Amazingly enough, sarcasm tasted like a blend of Darjeeling tea and chocolate. Sweet and spicy and absolutely delicious. This made me melt and chuckle at the same time.

"We'll discuss the appalling state of your sex life later, Potter. God, go stop that woman. Now, please. I'd hate to have to commit matricide so soon after getting out of Azkaban." *snickers*

Great job. Oh, and I loved your warning. Go Team EWE!

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primadonna611 May 8 2008, 18:24:07 UTC
Well done- smart, engaging fic. Narcissa stole the show in this one.

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tomatoe18 May 8 2008, 18:53:42 UTC
Oh god, oh god, oh god. That was wholly brilliant! You took my breath away... because... did I tell you that was brilliant?!?! This was one of the funniest things I've read in the worldcup and I don't think my stomach had ever hurt so much from reading a fic more than now because I've been trying to suppress my laughter as to not annoy everyone in the vicinity with my incessant giggling over Harry being helplessly steered and dominated by Narcissa!

The part that had me laughing the most? The HUGE headlines (the one about wedding bells) totally came out of left field for me. I cherish it. Loved Kingsley's reaction to that, too. <333 ( ... )

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alisanne May 8 2008, 21:06:38 UTC
I love this story.
The one liners in it are excellent, your Draco is SUCH a PRAT *giggles* and poor Harry blundering his way through things is always fun to read.
This was a joy to read again. :)

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sassy_cissa May 8 2008, 21:22:05 UTC
This simply rocks my world! I love your Narcissa - she is just so perfect.

This story is so much fun and wonderfully done!

Excellent job, Team EWE!!

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