This zipped right along and was a pleasure at every moment. You struck a perfect balance with your in-control, snarky Draco who revealed flashes of vulnerability and genuine emotion. Although it's true that in canon we saw a fragile, desperate Narcissa, I think that that was because the situation itself was desperate and demanded that, and that in other circumstances she could be just as masterful, conniving and confident as you portray her here. You did a superb job with the sex; superb. Extremely hot, realistic, and personal (and by that I mean specific to Harry and Draco. You couldn't substitute any random pairing and have it work like this).
I'd *love* to read the scene where Draco realizes the mugging setup has gone all to hell. That must have just about *killed* him. In short, a very entertaining fic that packed an emotional punch as well. A great addition to the fest.
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You did a superb job with the sex; superb. Extremely hot, realistic, and personal (and by that I mean specific to Harry and Draco. You couldn't substitute any random pairing and have it work like this).
I'd *love* to read the scene where Draco realizes the mugging setup has gone all to hell. That must have just about *killed* him. In short, a very entertaining fic that packed an emotional punch as well. A great addition to the fest.
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