Disappointment by erisfics

Jan 23, 2006 00:29

Title: Disappointment
Author: erisfics
Words: 484
Rating: PG-13/R?
Warnings: Language. Language all over the place.

Not everything turns out the way you intend; sometimes things go pear-shaped. That's not always a bad thing. )

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nailfile January 23 2006, 06:59:10 UTC
A bunny? I'd never thought about Harry's animagus being small and furry :) But I love the way you added character features to his appearance, with the "round markings around his eyes that look like spectacles perched on his nose, and his black fur spikes horrendously around tall ears." Plus, Ferret!Draco - heh, they're both small and furry :)

And then my favourite line:
"Then I'll kill you. When you're least expecting it.”
“Except I'll expect it now,”

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erisfics January 25 2006, 05:31:13 UTC
Hee. Bunny!Harry was so much fun to write. I remembered that all of the animagi had something about their animals that pointed to their "real" identity, so I immediately knew he needed the glasses. The scar was too easy!

And of course, what else would Draco be? He already knows what it's like to be a ferret!

Thanks for reading. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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lyttlelucyfer January 23 2006, 09:25:25 UTC
That was cool. I like that Draco kissed him on the ear. That rounded it off nicely, I thought.

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erisfics January 25 2006, 05:34:29 UTC
Thanks for reading!

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whoyouinvent January 23 2006, 13:18:25 UTC
who's a cuddly wuddly widdle muffin! i love it! animagus formms in the books are always to elegant, or useful, or something. no-one really turns into something fluffy and cuddly. this is perfect.

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erisfics January 25 2006, 05:35:16 UTC
Haha! I'm so glad you liked it!

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erisfics January 25 2006, 05:36:32 UTC
Thanks for reading!

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amanuensis1 January 23 2006, 15:25:33 UTC
Oh, I loved that last set of exchanges in particular!

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erisfics January 25 2006, 05:37:34 UTC
Hee. Glad you liked it! Thanks so much for reading!

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