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Disappointment by erisfics

Jan 23, 2006 00:29

Title: Disappointment
Author: erisfics
Words: 484
Rating: PG-13/R?
Warnings: Language. Language all over the place.

( Not everything turns out the way you intend; sometimes things go pear-shaped. That's not always a bad thing. )

dragon

Comments 19

karadin January 23 2006, 15:27:52 UTC

great last line!

erisfics January 25 2006, 05:44:14 UTC

Thanks!

thekams January 24 2006, 00:42:42 UTC

Haha, I love their forms! So cuddly, though ferrets...so not my cup of tea. They give me the wiggins. I much prefer little bunnie Harry =P The last line was pure love <3

erisfics January 25 2006, 05:51:24 UTC

Oh, but how can you not like ferrets? They move like little fuzzy Chinese Dragons!

Thanks so much for reading!

thekams January 25 2006, 05:53:06 UTC

Oh, my ex used to have a ferret, and it creeped me right out...crazy little thing!

myrddin January 24 2006, 03:17:34 UTC

Oh, nice. Bunny Harry. Priceless. XD

erisfics January 25 2006, 05:52:51 UTC

Hee. Glad you liked it!

142978 January 25 2006, 22:01:56 UTC

Cute and funny! I really liked this.

talanoa January 27 2006, 05:35:21 UTC

This was fun! :D Nose-twitching bunny!Harry is great. I'll admit to not really being able to pin-point Draco's form. I realise from the other comments it may be a ferret, but I don't really know how they look so I'm going to stick with what I first thought; kitten!Draco. :)

“Cunting Muggly animagus transfiguration.”

Best wizard swearing, ever. Great swearing all round, but cunting Muggly ...ahaha, that's lovely. :D

Their dialogue is also great. :)