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Bones/Supernatural: Booth & Sam: "Seeing Ghosts"

Apr 12, 2009 23:55

Title: Seeing Ghosts
Fandoms: Bones and Supernatural
Pairings: none.
Rating: PG
Warnings/Spoilers: Language.
Summary: Sam and Booth at a bar.
Notes: Written for comment_fic prompt seeing ghosts by katbcoll.

( seeing ghosts........ )

bones: booth, bones, supernatural: crossover, -rated pg, -2009, supernatural: sam, bones: crossover, supernatural

Comments 14

ophite68 April 14 2009, 02:30:38 UTC

I liked it, but rest in peace, not piece.

flareonfury April 14 2009, 19:09:14 UTC

Glad you liked it & thanks for telling me I did that. ^^ *goes to fix it*

bugeyedmonster April 15 2009, 01:45:13 UTC

Interesting ficlet. BTW, cool banner. Is that a doll done up as Zatanna or what? I think there's some photoshop in it.

(^_^)/
BEM

flareonfury April 15 2009, 03:15:10 UTC

Thank you on the fic and banner. That is not a doll done up as Zatanna, she's an actress that played Zatanna on the show Smallville this season. And I did edit it a little by cutting out a person that was behind her and changed her eye color to the color that her eyes are whenever she used her powers on the show. :)

bugeyedmonster April 15 2009, 03:16:08 UTC

Can you tell I haven't seen Smallville?

(^_^)/
BEM

flareonfury April 15 2009, 03:17:19 UTC

I figured, lol.

kaddywhak April 15 2009, 02:47:39 UTC

Okay, this is awesome (I love Bones/Spn fic!) And I really enjoyed reading it. Just a few mistakes though:
"glancing away from the man and took another gulp" That would be either "he glanced away from the man and took another gulp" or "glancing away from the man and taking another gulp"
"there are really creatures of supernatural creatures out there" should be "there are really supernatural creatures out there"

flareonfury April 15 2009, 03:12:24 UTC

Thanks so much! ^^ *fixed the mistakes* I was rushing to get the fics done so I guess I made a lot of mistakes. Thanks for letting me know.

makd April 15 2009, 04:28:25 UTC

Lots of fun, there!

One sentence confused me, though: "Kid, you’ve just saved me from thinking I was insane these past few weeks this past night and kept my partner out harm’s way. "

flareonfury May 6 2009, 21:05:51 UTC

Thanks! ♥

I changed it around a bit... it was supposed to hint at how Sam and Seeley met.

saavikam77 April 15 2009, 18:22:25 UTC

Hehe... Good of Booth to decide their meeting never happened. :p I have to wonder what Brennan's reaction would have been to the whole situation...

flareonfury May 6 2009, 21:06:16 UTC

Glad you liked ^^