Comments | hardlyfatal: Blue Heaven, chapter 1

hardlyfatal

Blue Heaven, chapter 1

Jun 30, 2005 20:56

Couldn't get a beta, so if it sucks, it sucks.

Fandom: Fruits Basket
Rating: PG
Summary: Class 2D has to take a course in Family Life, where they're all paired off in pretend marriages for the year. Hijinks ensue. TohruxKyou and more.

( Just Tohru and Me )

fruits basket, fic, blue heaven

Comments 42

anijgrl7 July 1 2005, 02:29:22 UTC

Oh that was really cute. Thanks for sharing.

hardlyfatal July 1 2005, 20:25:27 UTC

Thanks!

honooko July 1 2005, 03:02:24 UTC

I. Love. You.

I absolutely LOVE this, and I can't wait for more. You've hit everyone's character spot on! <3

hardlyfatal July 1 2005, 20:25:36 UTC

Thanks!

adesso July 1 2005, 03:14:51 UTC

Hey, saw your post in fruits_basket and thought I'd take a look at the ficcage after I could pull myself away from the pretty Kougaiji banner up there.

So, yeah, WOW. Mad love for this story so far. Spot-on characterizations, witty dialogue, interesting set-up, and OMG SO CUTE AND FUNNY. Uo "claiming" Yuki floored me. I love it when she goes against the fanclub girls. XD

And this'll end up Uo/Yuki, yes? Not sure if I've ever seen that pairing before, and it's definitely a unique idea. I look forward to seeing how that'll develop.

Did I mention your characterization roxx0rz? It's damn near impossible to find IC fic in this fandom, and you've got them all down perfectly.

The only thing I can point out is that I think Japanese students stay in the same classroom all day, and the teachers are the ones who move around. But that's an insignificant detail, so I probably shouldn't even be pointing it out. ^.^;

Anyway, will you be posting updates at fruits_basket or putting this up at FFN, or something? 'Cause I'd love to read more when you can get it ( ... )

hardlyfatal July 1 2005, 20:27:40 UTC

Thank you so much!

I'm not promising Uo/Yuki anything, for now it's just as I showed-- her helped him out from pity more than anything else.

I'm posting here, on fruits_basket, and my Yahoo group.

Thanks again!

reizero July 1 2005, 03:15:23 UTC

You are my hero. With fanfics like this one, I won't lose my faith in the Fruits Basket fandom anytime soon. No, really. It's funny AND fluffy, and has Kyou x Tohru moments! *_* <3 And, like I've said, Hana is THE STAR of the show called 'Family Life'. By the way, the concept is absolutely brilliant, too. ^_^

And yes, Kyou is WHIPPED.

hardlyfatal July 1 2005, 20:28:59 UTC

Wait til you read chapter 3, it's Hana-riffic and I think you'll be really surprised! Heh.

Glad you're enjoying it, thanks so much for your kind compliments :)

airunicorn July 1 2005, 03:15:52 UTC

your fanfic is amazing! *grins* I love your Kyou :D

hardlyfatal July 1 2005, 20:29:42 UTC

Thanks so much! I love Kyou, and I think it's showing in how I write him :)