Blue Heaven, chapter 1

[hardlyfatal]

Couldn't get a beta, so if it sucks, it sucks.

Fandom: Fruits Basket
Rating: PG
Summary: Class 2D has to take a course in Family Life, where they're all paired off in pretend marriages for the year. Hijinks ensue. TohruxKyou and more.

Comments

[adesso]

Hey, saw your post in fruits_basket and thought I'd take a look at the ficcage after I could pull myself away from the pretty Kougaiji banner up there.

So, yeah, WOW. Mad love for this story so far. Spot-on characterizations, witty dialogue, interesting set-up, and OMG SO CUTE AND FUNNY. Uo "claiming" Yuki floored me. I love it when she goes against the fanclub girls. XD

And this'll end up Uo/Yuki, yes? Not sure if I've ever seen that pairing before, and it's definitely a unique idea. I look forward to seeing how that'll develop.

Did I mention your characterization roxx0rz? It's damn near impossible to find IC fic in this fandom, and you've got them all down perfectly.

The only thing I can point out is that I think Japanese students stay in the same classroom all day, and the teachers are the ones who move around. But that's an insignificant detail, so I probably shouldn't even be pointing it out. ^.^;

Anyway, will you be posting updates at fruits_basket or putting this up at FFN, or something? 'Cause I'd love to read more when you can get it updated. :D

[hardlyfatal]

Thank you so much!

I'm not promising Uo/Yuki anything, for now it's just as I showed-- her helped him out from pity more than anything else.

I'm posting here, on fruits_basket, and my Yahoo group.

Thanks again!