Blue Heaven, chapter 1

[hardlyfatal]

Couldn't get a beta, so if it sucks, it sucks.

Fandom: Fruits Basket
Rating: PG
Summary: Class 2D has to take a course in Family Life, where they're all paired off in pretend marriages for the year. Hijinks ensue. TohruxKyou and more.

Comments

[lolita_minako]

Excellent. I love it!

[hardlyfatal]

Thanks!

[prpl_pen]

Oh, this is just great so far. Hana is spot-on perfect. Good characterization all around, really. Look forward to more!

[hardlyfatal]

Thank you!

[indeigo]

Loved it. Your characterisation was wonderful, especially Hana (though I'm not the first to say that.) I love this idea - it's cute and fun without being sappy or pointless. Please write more!

[hardlyfatal]

Thanks!

[talyssa_yasha]

That was GREAT!!! FANTASTIC!!!! Do you kno how long i've been looking for a good tohru and Kyou fic??!! Thank you so so so so so much!! i love it!! I love Hana!! You have captured her personality so well in your story!! you've captured all their personalitys so well!! Please update soon!!! i must know what happens!!

[hardlyfatal]

Ok, I promise! :)

I'm glad you're enjoying it so much!

[fan_elune]

I find that this was less accessible to someone who doesn't know squat about this fandom than your previous forrays into anime fanfiction, but there were still some hilarious lines. And I think I like Hana a lot. Thanks for sharing!

[hardlyfatal]

Hana is funny as well, but I have deep affection for Uo too-- I love how brusque she is, but with hidden sympathy inside. They're all lovely.

Thanks for taking a chance on this, I appreciate it, you sweetie!

[fan_elune]

I *love* your icon.

That said - I like Uo too, she's my second favourite with... is it Khyou? *goes and checks* Kyou. Dunno why I wanted to put a "h" in there.

It's not taking much of a chance at all when it's you writing, hun. You know it. ;)

[hardlyfatal]

You lovely, lovely girl. [cuddles you]