Comments | hank_alex: fic: you better run away, baby (before I put my spell on you)

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fic: you better run away, baby (before I put my spell on you) | Hank/Alex, pg13

Jun 06, 2012 01:29

Title: you better run away, baby (before I put my spell on you)
Author: kevo
Pairing: Hank/Alex
Rating: PG-13 (language, sexual situations)
Warnings:: dubious use of telepathic control, but nothing too scary.
Word Count: just over 6,500
Summary: In his quest for a cure to his physical mutation, Hank gets more than he bargained for - and then some.
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authors: b, human!hank, word count: 5000-9999, genre: drama, genre: crack, .human!hank, genre: fluff/schmoop, type: fanfiction, rating: pg-13

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beizanten June 6 2012, 11:37:53 UTC

The start is very amusing! Don't really like dumb Alex but I guess it is necessary so Hank could pick up what happen. The kiss is so sexy! The ending is so Funny! I like the Erik part and how he talk about self control and suddenly kiss Hank then Alex not even hesitant to knock him out. Erik is rather close off but I don't think he is mean to Hank or any other mutant, his love his own kind too much. Sean and Raven bttling over Hank is so funny!

beakanoma June 6 2012, 16:32:17 UTC

Thank you so much! I chose to use a slightly-dumber-than-usual Alex for comedic effect - and nothing in the film suggests that he's very smart, so it works. And he's not completely stupid. Just... limited.

beizanten June 6 2012, 16:51:41 UTC

Actually he is really smart. In the movie, it evidence he choose to go to solitary on his own so he had to be smart. This is of comic eveident but look at his family his father was a multi talented war hero who is expert in martial art, weaponry, and strategist. His brother is really intelligent also.

Comic Alex has master in geophysic from a famous university and a famous professor even took him under his wing. he is also said that he is an intuitive fighter, strategist and tactician and have more talent to be a leader and tactician than his brother Scott

beakanoma June 6 2012, 17:15:05 UTC

Ah, but look back at what I said: nothing in the film suggests that he's very smart. Which is what this fic is based on. Until First Class 2 tells us Alex is actually a genius, I don't see any problem with interpreting that he's not. And even then, he's not a complete idiot. Just not the sharpest.

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beakanoma June 6 2012, 16:35:26 UTC

I enjoyed writing that Charles scene more than I probably should have. That and basically all the things that came out of Alex's mouth.

Thank you so much for reading! Those three adjectives were exactly what I was going for.

flowermasters June 6 2012, 15:26:04 UTC

Oh, finally, an everyone-wants-to-fuck-Hank fic! Yesss! This was epic and hilarious.

Oh my God Erik kissed Hank excuse me while I laugh til I cry

beakanoma June 6 2012, 16:38:13 UTC

Riiight!? That boy is too gorgeous for everyone to NOT want to fuck! (Every time I watch that scene where he injects himself I just wanna yell at the screen: BUT YOU'RE SO HOT, EVEN WITH THE WEIRD FEET.)

I'm so glad you enjoyed it. And I was worried the Erik kiss would seem a little forced, so I'm glad you enjoyed that, too :D

quixyjie June 6 2012, 19:43:26 UTC

Um, holy. I love what you did with the ending. And all those other things I said before. Oh, just one thing that I caught, at the very end when Raven's bringing them food, she says, "You two might want to stay down here a little while long," instead of 'longer ( ... )

beakanoma June 6 2012, 20:01:24 UTC

OH GOD DAMMIT. It's little things like that where you just think, really, self? You now better! I'm so happy you like the ending. You were right, it needed something more conclusive. And I threw in the other changes you suggested. You were right, it wasn't entirely clear what Alex was doing and when ( ... )

quixyjie June 6 2012, 23:59:15 UTC

skinny-dipping! har har har nudge nudge

beakanoma June 7 2012, 04:29:49 UTC

Right? How amazing?

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