fic: you better run away, baby (before I put my spell on you) | Hank/Alex, pg13

[beakanoma]

Title: you better run away, baby (before I put my spell on you)
Author: kevo
Pairing: Hank/Alex
Rating: PG-13 (language, sexual situations)
Warnings:: dubious use of telepathic control, but nothing too scary.
Word Count: just over 6,500
Summary: In his quest for a cure to his physical mutation, Hank gets more than he bargained for - and then some.
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Comments

[quixyjie]

Um, holy. I love what you did with the ending. And all those other things I said before. Oh, just one thing that I caught, at the very end when Raven's bringing them food, she says, "You two might want to stay down here a little while long," instead of 'longer

[beakanoma]

OH GOD DAMMIT. It's little things like that where you just think, really, self? You now better! I'm so happy you like the ending. You were right, it needed something more conclusive. And I threw in the other changes you suggested. You were right, it wasn't entirely clear what Alex was doing and when

[quixyjie]

skinny-dipping! har har har nudge nudge

[beakanoma]

Right? How amazing?

[quixyjie]

also, i can't believe it's been a year! happy xmfc anniversary!

[beakanoma]

I know! God, can't believe it's been a year.

[beakanoma]

Just realized I basically repeated your comment back to you in this reply. I am not so much smart.