Title: The Promotion
Author:
gypsyflame Pairing: Snape/Draco/Harry
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~5,400
Disclaimer: Characters are the property of J.K. Rowling, et al. This was created for fun, not for profit.
Warnings: D/s; humiliation; consensually-roleplayed dubious consent (say that three times fast)
Summary: Harry really needs that promotion. Draco is
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They treat him like a plastic puppet to manipulate to there wishes however they wantThat is not at all what is happening here. The power exchange between Draco, Severus, and Harry is based on mutual trust and respect. Draco chooses to surrender his control to his lovers because (a) he finds it sexually gratifying, (b) it gives him an outlet for his anxiety regarding control issues, and (c) it's a way that he expresses his love for and trust in Harry and Severus ( ... )
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I word it wrong. I didn't see this as abuse or anything at all. When I said 'puppet' I was thinking of how they really didn't just outwardly ask him if he was okay with it or not, but I guess that is were the trust comes in.
I wish there were fics out there that explains the D/s relationship better, especially to those who is new to the whole thing. Most just start head first into the relationship(they are already together) and never really explain how they got there.
Sorry if I insulted you with my comment, but I was just typing what I felt without really thinking about it like I always do.
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They really didn't just outwardly ask him if he was okay with it or notHmm, I think I might know where the misunderstanding here is. As I stated in the header, this fic depicts sexual roleplay - in other words, the men are in an established relationship, and they decided to run this fantasy scene to spice up their sex a little ( ... )
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A Slutty/Submissive!Draco is always appreciated.
I love that Draco is so thoroughly used and debauched and so . . .
UNF. I might have had a mini-orgasm just thinking about it.
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And Wow.. This story is sure HOT!! xD
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Even if for a moment I really thought I wouldn't be able to read it when it became a bit bitter with that hint of Harry betraying Draco.
Anyway, an amazing fic :)
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Anyway I gave the story a try, but unfortunatly it didn't suit my tastes. However, there is no doubt that your writing skills are amazing, so don't give up.
Sorry if I angered you or disapointed you, the smut was greatly done, but my heart bled at Harry's betrayal, stupid Harry, bit of an arsehole in this fic! In my fanatsy world Charlie saves the day and rescues poor Draco! Hehe lol my fave pairing!
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Draco definitely wouldn't have kicked Harry and Severus in the balls and run off, since this whole thing was his idea in the first place! LOL. I'm sorry if that wasn't clear to you.
But I will agree that Charlie/Draco is a delicious pairing. ;-)
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Charlie/Draco are HOT! Will you be writing another fic about them soon? I know quite a few other good fics with this pairing.
Sorry again! Today has just not been my day! =(
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I haven't actually ever written Charlie/Draco, but I really love the pairing and hope to write a fic featuring it one day. I'm just waiting for that perfect plotbunny.
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