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FIC: The Promotion

Sep 03, 2011 14:22

Title: The Promotion
Author: gypsyflame
Pairing: Snape/Draco/Harry
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: ~5,400
Disclaimer: Characters are the property of J.K. Rowling, et al. This was created for fun, not for profit.
Warnings: D/s; humiliation; consensually-roleplayed dubious consent (say that three times fast)
Summary: Harry really needs that promotion. Draco is ( Read more... )

controlverse, ot3, fic

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Well.... blackmagicthing September 4 2011, 02:52:20 UTC

I hate and like this story ( ... )

Re: Well.... gypsyflame September 4 2011, 03:18:46 UTC

I think you may be misreading the intent of this story.

They treat him like a plastic puppet to manipulate to there wishes however they wantThat is not at all what is happening here. The power exchange between Draco, Severus, and Harry is based on mutual trust and respect. Draco chooses to surrender his control to his lovers because (a) he finds it sexually gratifying, (b) it gives him an outlet for his anxiety regarding control issues, and (c) it's a way that he expresses his love for and trust in Harry and Severus ( ... )

Re: Well.... blackmagicthing September 5 2011, 15:41:00 UTC

That is true. I did miss the point completely, and can see how it can be seen as strength to give up your power to the ones your trust, but I never really did get the complete concept of the D/s, and how it really worked.

I word it wrong. I didn't see this as abuse or anything at all. When I said 'puppet' I was thinking of how they really didn't just outwardly ask him if he was okay with it or not, but I guess that is were the trust comes in.

I wish there were fics out there that explains the D/s relationship better, especially to those who is new to the whole thing. Most just start head first into the relationship(they are already together) and never really explain how they got there.

Sorry if I insulted you with my comment, but I was just typing what I felt without really thinking about it like I always do.

Re: Well.... gypsyflame September 5 2011, 16:24:07 UTC

I wasn't insulted, only frustrated. It's certainly not your fault if you're not familiar with D/s! And as you said, most D/s fics do start when the relationship is already established, which is unfortunate.

They really didn't just outwardly ask him if he was okay with it or notHmm, I think I might know where the misunderstanding here is. As I stated in the header, this fic depicts sexual roleplay - in other words, the men are in an established relationship, and they decided to run this fantasy scene to spice up their sex a little ( ... )

Re: Well.... blackmagicthing September 5 2011, 19:31:24 UTC

Yes, that does clear things up to a very sparkly degree. ;D

I do know what role play is, but I didn't read that part since I was a bit excited to read the piece and skipped it. x_x

I know of a few stories that builds up to the D/s relationship, but none of them are in the HP fandom, all of them are from the Naruto fandom(though I haven't read any stories from this fandom for some months now). The stories were well written, but I never finished them.

Re: Well.... ffaddict89 September 25 2011, 16:04:04 UTC

Lol that's why I was a little confused until I read this comment. I forgot to read the warnings before hand.

At the part when Draco was thinking that he couldn't pretend to be unwilling anymore is where I got confused. I couldn't tell if he was RPing or if it was real.

Great story though!

Re: Well.... gypsyflame October 1 2011, 18:34:46 UTC

Thank you! Warnings are important, LOL. I'm glad you liked it.

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