Comments | gryff_of_grace: Destined, chapter 15

gryff_of_grace

Destined, chapter 15

Oct 02, 2007 23:23

Title: Destined
Fandom: Heroes
Pairing: Peter/Claire, West/Claire, Zach/Claire friendship
Rating: PG-13
Summary: As Claire continues with life after New York, the reappearance of her uncle in her life is only the beginning of a series of events that will change her life forever. This Chapter: Claire's missing. Uh oh.
Previous Chapters: 1, 2, 3, ( Read more... )

chaptered fic, peter/claire, fandom: heroes, universe: season 1 canon, rating: pg

Comments 28

kal_ella October 3 2007, 06:02:54 UTC

this line gave me the lulz...

"Thanks." He leans in so that his forehead touches hers, and when he pulls back, Molly's cheeks are flaming red. Zach grins; if Peter had done that to him, he'd probably be blushing, too. Geez.

oh Zachy, i'd be blushing right along with you. lol

and what an evil cliffhanger! XD~~~*

can't wait to read more! `=D

gryff_of_grace October 3 2007, 23:14:30 UTC

I'd be blushing, too. :)

Glad you liked this, despite the evil cliffhanger

riane_71 October 3 2007, 16:46:27 UTC

I've been following this story & this chapter was great! I love cliffhangers; it's very much in keeping with the show. I loved everyone getting together to find Claire & the boys. I really loved that Peter acknowledges that Zach is probably the only other person to want her back as much as he does. Claire has amnesia?! I can't wait to see how this turns out!

gryff_of_grace October 3 2007, 23:16:22 UTC

Oh, I'm glad you're liking the cliffhangers! I also like that you picked up that Peter&Zach moment... I really feel like Zach, out of all the people, wants her back as much as Peter does.

So happy that you liked this chapter, thanks for reviewing! :)

joanna_484 October 3 2007, 19:00:13 UTC

"I'm her best friend, West," snaps Zach.

Bwah! I love Zach putting West in his place :D Don't like West being so pushy toward and stalkery around Claire.

And your depiction of Peter's evident awkwardness around and dislike of West seems to me right on, considering the jumble of conflicting emotions Peter is experiencing for Claire :)

He leans in so that his forehead touches hers, and when he pulls back, Molly's cheeks are flaming red. Zach grins; if Peter had done that to him, he'd probably be blushing, too. Geez.

Nice detail *lol* Maybe we can get at least something like that between Paire on the show *sigh* (along with a hug and a kiss, of course :D).

Peter lets out a hoarse chuckle. "Uh, focusing on Claire is not hard for me," he says.Gggguuuuuuhhhh… Of course it's not, Peter… :D ( ... )

gryff_of_grace October 4 2007, 14:02:45 UTC

Ha, glad you liked that comment from Zach to West. While I was writing this, of course, I had no idea how Canon!West would turn in to be a little stalkery, but within the realm of this fic, West doesn't really know anything about Zach's and Claire's friendship. So it's kind of like, "Woah, how did this new guy know about her powers?" while Zach's thinking the same thing about him. But as far as the tension goes, there's definitely more between West and Peter than there is West and Zach. For obvious reasons. :D

It is very sad that Claire can't remember Peter. But should make for some interesting reading, no? :)

Glad you liked this chapter, hon! I'm still so grateful to receive your reviews every chapter. Keeps me grounded. :)

joanna_484 October 4 2007, 14:23:32 UTC

But should make for some interesting reading, no? :)

Yes, indeed! *nods* ;)

Glad you liked this chapter, hon! I'm still so grateful to receive your reviews every chapter. Keeps me grounded. :)

Why, thank you! That is truly a lovely complement :) *hugs*

YAY!! envywrath1 October 3 2007, 21:32:28 UTC

I don't think I have ever responded to your story but I love it!! I have been sooo enthraled in it. Evertime you come out with a chapter and I read it, I can't wait for the next one. So I hope you update soon. Poor Peter, Claire doesn't remember him. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Re: YAY!! gryff_of_grace October 4 2007, 14:03:45 UTC

Hi, there! Wow, I'm so glad that you love this fic! It always pleases me to know that there are readers out there who enjoy it. I'm glad you liked this chapter and I'll try my best to update soon. Thanks for commenting! :)

papayacrazy October 3 2007, 22:05:51 UTC

Woah. Woah woah woah woah woah...

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woah.

This is freaking crazy. <3 it totally though. Definetely Claire/Monty/Simon bonding moment. I like that. I like it when Claire coddles her two younger half-brothers.

You have the most amazing writing style. You never stay in one scene too long and you really keep us guessing. Rock on! Update soon okay? I don't exactly like waiting for about a month per update. Heh. :)

gryff_of_grace October 4 2007, 14:06:27 UTC

:D Yeah, who would have thought that this fic would turn out to be so nuts? I certainly didn't. I'm glad that you're liking it, tho! And you mentioned the Claire/Monty/Simon moment, which I enjoyed writing. 'Course, Claire doesn't know they're her brothers at this point, but still. :)

Thank you so much for your compliments, hon. I know it's rough waiting for updates - I'm gonna try my best to work on that. Thanks for reviewing! :)