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Losing Your Place

Nov 09, 2007 18:28

Title: Losing Your Place
Challenge: Bookmark challenge
Team: The Order
Words: 100
Rating: PG
Characters: Hermione, Severus, Ron

We buried Snape yesterday-seven witnesses, but no real mourners, though it’s creepy how much Harry is now making of the git ( Read more... )

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imhilien November 10 2007, 01:25:21 UTC

Very moving... poor Severus.

harmony_bites November 10 2007, 03:40:21 UTC

Indeed. Rowling left him a poor life and death... We'll have to make it up to him. (Harmony, suddenly having an urge to read some nice fluff.

droxy November 10 2007, 02:41:02 UTC

My GOD! That was a good one. A very nice dark sparking gem. Especially, the point where the bookmark was found- between love and death.

harmony_bites November 10 2007, 03:39:32 UTC

You would love the darkness in it. LOL. And yeah, that placing was deliberate--I actually feel love for Lily kept him in a kind of living death ever since he died that kept him bitter and from ever getting close to anyone else.

writermerrin November 10 2007, 02:48:49 UTC

Which just goes to show that the DEs don't have a corner on the angst, trauma, and death. Fascinating image.

harmony_bites November 10 2007, 03:36:33 UTC

Evil inflicts trauma--often the good guys, even when they win, take more than their share of it. So I'd think the Order could dish out their share sadly enough. Thanks for the review!

kribu November 10 2007, 08:36:27 UTC

Wonderful and tragic. Very well done!

harmony_bites November 10 2007, 09:02:20 UTC

Thanks! This is how I like my tragic, no-evading DH SSHG.

Short.

However, I love long, fluffy romantic SSHG...

Like more of "Enchanted"...

kribu November 10 2007, 09:20:15 UTC

Hehe - I think I prefer the tragic, strictly-canon SS/HG short too... otherwise it would get too angsty for me (and besides, when one is being strictly canon, there would probably not be all that much SS/HG to write about, anyway...)

And was that a subtle hint? ;-)

I do like fluff. Even if it's not really in character for either of them - I'm such a soppy romantic at heart.

harmony_bites November 10 2007, 09:23:48 UTC

And was that a subtle hint? ;-)

Subtle? Well... it was a hint...

I do like fluff. Even if it's not really in character for either of them - I'm such a soppy romantic at heart.

Well, it's uncanonical if you insist like Rowling on his dying--and not really in character for her if she marries that prat Ron.

However... if they just find the right person *cough*

Yeah, I'm soppy that way too...

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septentrion1970 November 10 2007, 10:28:06 UTC

That is brilliant!

harmony_bites November 10 2007, 10:28:45 UTC

Awww, thanks!