Fic: Don't Let Go (4/7)

Oct 10, 2010 07:25


Title: Don’t Let Go (4/7)

Author: gradgirl (aka Ali)

Rating: PG-13

Characters/Pairings: Luke/Reid, Luke/Noah, Ameera, Casey and OC

Summary: AU-When INS Agent Reid Oliver gets called to Oakdale, a simple case turns into the last thing he expects.

Warnings: None

Author’s Notes: Based upon this prompt. Thank you reilaroo for the wonderful prompt and your ( Read more... )

luke/reid; fic: don't let go

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msluredin October 10 2010, 18:06:06 UTC
"He loved Noah" -Interesting use of past tense. I get the feeling that Luke is trying to convince himself that he still loves noah, even though he's sensing a change ( ... )

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gradgirl_07 October 10 2010, 23:54:23 UTC
Thank you! And yes the loved wasn't a typo. I think Luke is trying to continue to make everything better for all of them, while he is being pulled towards Reid.

I'm flattered by you quoting me, that some of this sections really stood out for you.

Reid and Luke have a definite connection, but they have to figure out where to go and what to do with it. And yes, Reid so wants a future with Luke but I don't know how he's going to accomplish that.

Sam is figuring out what is going on with Reid, but Sam also cares about Reid. This is complicated all around.

I appreciate all of the comments and insights. ~Ali

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ltklo October 10 2010, 18:29:26 UTC
“No one has ever said that to me before. That I’m easy to talk to,” the older man admitted.
Loved the part where Reid laughed out loud when Luke said he was easy to talk to. I had the same reaction :)

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gradgirl_07 October 10 2010, 23:55:10 UTC
Thank you! I kind of laughed myself. Reid? Easy to talk to? But Luke is smitten and he finds Reid easy to talk to... ~Ali

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casaluna85 October 10 2010, 18:44:35 UTC
Definitely enjoyed the one-on-one time Luke and Reid had. Can't wait to see what happens when Luke finds out who Reid really is ...

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gradgirl_07 October 10 2010, 23:55:38 UTC
Thank you. Yep, Luke is going to figure out who Reid is and why he's there...can't say anything more though. ~Ali

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jem_018 October 10 2010, 19:09:42 UTC
I'm glad that Luke was honest with Noah about how he feels.
Noah is just being unreasonable in his jealousy. *sighs*

I love that Luke finds Reid easy to talk to. :)

Sam wondering what's taking Reid so long is making me nervous.

Great chapter as always. :)

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gradgirl_07 October 10 2010, 23:57:20 UTC
Luke has to be honest with himself and Noah and Noah is just confused and he wanted to help Ameera, but he picked the wrong way to do it.

Luke is interested and after everything that he's been going through it's nice for him to have someone to talk to and yep, that's Reid.

Sam knows that something is going on with Reid, but will he figure it out himself?

Thank you! I'm glad you liked this chapter. ~Ali

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joann414 October 10 2010, 19:41:38 UTC
Noah is so careless as always. I love how Luke and Reid banter back and forth even though there is still that little awkwardness like two tigers circling each other before one goes in for the kill. can't wait for the next chapter. this is on of my fav reads.

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gradgirl_07 October 10 2010, 23:58:27 UTC
I love, love, your description of Luke and Reid. That is brilliant.

Noah is careless and a little clueless, but he's a kid and he's going to make mistakes. So glad you're enjoying this story. ~Ali

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