Comments | gottalovev: Fic: "A Hole in the World", (4/4)

gottalovev

Fic: "A Hole in the World", (4/4)

Sep 08, 2010 11:49

Part 1, Part 2, Part 3

( A Hole in the World, part 4 )

sga fic: john/rodney, scifibigbang, fic, sga

Comments 36

gaffsie September 10 2010, 19:20:18 UTC

This was really good!

You really managed to convey John's worry and frustration with Rodney's disappearance - I was so in tune with him that when Rodney came back I wanted to punch his lights out for turning John into such a wreck. The backrub made me get over my ire though. ;)

gottalovev September 12 2010, 00:56:02 UTC

thank you so much!

I am so, so happy you empathized with John and his turmoil about the whole thing. I was hoping it would work. and hey, backrub! \o/ lol! thanks again for reading and your awesome comment!

mezzo_cammin September 10 2010, 20:54:27 UTC

Now that's how I like to spend an afternoon - drinking coffee and enjoying a well-crafted story! Wonderful plot, and you had me in suspense until the end. I thought you had the characterizations down really well, and I especially liked the Ronon and John interactions - it rang very true. Woolsey, as well. Oh, and Lorne!! That first scene with him, I thought HE was going to tell John that Rodney was missing. Zalenka was very much Zalenka - so, yes, I think you have the voices down very well. Good job!

I'm so glad that they worked their way through being such emotionally stunted guys to get together in the end.

I really loved this bit..."Let me officially welcome you to the wonderful world of gay sex with me," Rodney says, mock serious. "Meaning that I'm, well, practically always in the mood, as one should be."

It sounds like something Rodney would say. *g*

Thanks for writing this!

gottalovev September 12 2010, 00:58:16 UTC

ohhh, excellent! that you found the characters true to what you believe of them is the best compliment you can make me. well that and saying you had a good time reading! so thank you so much, that means the world to me!

emotionally stunted they are, the poor woobies. but I could not leave them like that, so happy ending with sexy shenanigans it is ;)

thank YOU for reading and this wonderful comment! *smishes*

rawa_02 September 11 2010, 00:02:36 UTC

Very well done, thanx!

gottalovev September 12 2010, 00:58:37 UTC

I am thrilled you liked it, thank you so much!

ellel September 12 2010, 14:01:40 UTC

Well done,Lou-WELL DONE.I really enjoyed the fic,such a wonderful distraction from stupid RL and I had a blast reading.I was intrigued by where the hell did Rodney dissapeared to and even worried about him,because that was indeed so unlike him to just vanish like that and John's worry and frustration was so real.

"Let me officially welcome you to the wonderful world of gay sex with me," Rodney says, mock serious. "Meaning that I'm, well, practically always in the mood, as one should be."
LMAO!Oh,Rodney-how so awesome?:D
And well,lucky Sheppard is lucky!

:)

gottalovev September 13 2010, 16:56:16 UTC

thank you so much honey! I am really glad that you had a good time reading it and were taken by the story, enough that it was a distraction from real life. ♥

ha! tee hee, I love writing Rodney, so this fic was a challenge because he wasn't there for 2/3rd of it. glad you found that funny.

I'd love a Rodney backrub of my own *nods*

melagan September 12 2010, 21:54:47 UTC

Wow! I was caught up in this from the very start and couldn't stop reading.

Loved the build up for this, the searching, John figuring things out and all of it really. Radek and Ronon were awesome in this.

Just a joy to read. Thank you.

gottalovev September 13 2010, 16:59:12 UTC

what wonderful praise, thank you so much! Maintaining interest through a long story is always something I worry about, I am glad it worked for you. A specially hurray that you liked Zelenka and Ronon, too. they are quiet but important forces :)

thank you so much again, for reading and taking the time for this awesome comment :)