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Apr 18, 2010 19:36


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janie_tangerine April 18 2010, 23:42:53 UTC
.... oh God. As soon as I read one kink and one pairing I knew what I was going to write. Wait for me tomorrow, for it's two AM and grammar fails me, but I'm so on one like white on rice.

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gottalovev April 19 2010, 13:11:10 UTC
I see that you did! and OMG, AWESOME!

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Lost, Sawyer/Miles, knifeplay (but no porn, sorry) primarycolors92 April 19 2010, 04:28:21 UTC
Sawyer trusts Miles. This is irrefutable fact, born from late nights of alcohol and the weight of a shared secret.

Miles is smart, adaptable, and Sawyer knows that with him, he doesn't have to be LaFleur. Miles can know him as Sawyer, know him like this, and be relied upon to lie convincingly enough the next day.

Sawyer trusts Miles with his life and, more importantly, he trusts Miles with his lies.

He is never more relaxed, then, with Miles' hand against his throat, Miles' blade against his skin.

In a way, this is Miles' lie, the fact that despite the person he pretends to be, Miles cannot live, cannot survive, without his time of drawing aimless patterns against Sawyer's skin ( ... )

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Re: Lost, Sawyer/Miles, knifeplay (but no porn, sorry) primarycolors92 April 21 2010, 03:05:53 UTC
Thanks, hon!

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Re: Lost, Sawyer/Miles, knifeplay (but no porn, sorry) gottalovev April 19 2010, 12:54:41 UTC
omg, omg, this is FANTASTIC!

*flails*

this packs such a punch in so little words, I am amazed

Sawyer trusts Miles with his life and, more importantly, he trusts Miles with his lies.

this, yes. perfect.

and heck, this:

He almost never breaks the skin now, but in the beginning Sawyer had to explain away dozens of nicks, each break of the skin worth it for the memory of Miles' tongue moving in broad, flat swipes, cleaning away the blood with neither relish nor apology.

it is total porn in my book! so hot! gah!

thank you, I love it like burning and you are awesome ♥

(seems that flailing makes me mess my html coding! sorry!)

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Vporn, Damon/Alaric, knifeplay, R janie_tangerine April 19 2010, 12:35:29 UTC
The more this goes on, the more Alaric thinks that he has to be out of his mind.

Because well, being in a bed with someone who has turned his wife into a vampire (albeit on her request, so he can’t exactly blame him, as much as he’d like to) and killed him once is insane enough, and Alaric probably wasn’t in his right frame of mind when he didn’t try to get away from the situation, but letting him to this, well, that’s totally insane.

It doesn’t mean that he’s trying to put a stop to it. Maybe it’s because Damon can’t really kill him if he wanted, that’s established; but still, as Damon moves that silver knife (Alaric’s silver knife, fuck) right along his throat (and he could slit right there in less than a second if the just flicked his wrist a bit), the blade becoming warm from the contact with his skin, he can’t help biting his tongue in order not to moan ( ... )

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Re: Vporn, Damon/Alaric, knifeplay, R gottalovev April 19 2010, 12:59:54 UTC
ohhhh! okay, so I had a feeling that it was the one that had caught your eye! lol! and I've never been so glad to be right!

*dances*

this is AWESOME. I love how Alaric questions his sanity but still goes for it, although he fights showing how much it affects him. How Damon is toying with Alaric, in a perfect, perfect Damon way.

but what MAKES this is the flipping and role reversal! HOTNESS! OMG! it would totally make Damon crazy. and that last line is just flail inducing.

thank you so much babe, this is exactly what I hoped for!

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Re: Vporn, Damon/Alaric, knifeplay, R janie_tangerine April 19 2010, 13:59:42 UTC
Heee, thank you! As soon as I saw that prompt I was like NO I NEED TO BE ON THAT LIKE NOW, lol. I'm so glad you liked it, and that you liked the characterization! They're fun, I have to say. And I couldn't help the role reversal, it just wanted to go like that. ;) ;) Thanks again!!!!!!!!! :D

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Re: Vporn, Damon/Alaric, knifeplay, R streussal April 21 2010, 05:37:14 UTC
...this is really good.

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Re: Lost, Kevin/Sawyer, jealousy, marking, kinda public sex gottalovev April 20 2010, 15:44:08 UTC
OMG, how I love you, let me show you it. ♥_♥

this is so mind-blowing fantastic, babe, I can't even begin to thank you.

there you go, making this bit of hotness and all I can do is flail at how hot and awesome it is. KEVIN! SAWYER! as COPS! having sex in the LOCKER ROOM! \o/

and not just regular semi public sex (I laughed at the idea of Kevin worrying Miles could walk in), no, hot as HELL possessive, growly and almost punishing sex because Sawyer is just a hot mess worrying his boyfriend will stray because he's so CHARMING everyone loves him (of course!).

Everything goes black, goes white, goes peaceful for a couple of burning, perfect seconds. He clings on to Sawyer's upper body, pulling him flush against him without really knowing what he wants to do with all that bulk. Have him. Hold him. Whatever it takes to make him feel better, always.awww! *happy sigh* and then he worries that Sawyer is maybe not ok and is gentle with him. this is so fantastic ( ... )

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Re: Lost, Kevin/Sawyer, jealousy, marking, kinda public sex haldoor_honey April 23 2010, 06:06:46 UTC
GUH! That is an incredibly hot scene. Very nicely done, thank you! ;-)

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Re: Kirk/McCoy; Public Sex; R gottalovev April 22 2010, 20:46:31 UTC
=D

oh wow, this is AWESOME! You write them go well, I could hear it all, see it all!

How McCoy is annoyed and grumbling but totally turned on anyway, Jim's sly little face probably smug from finally getting what he wants (loved loved loved the flashback of the cockblocking in the room, LOL! so Jim!), how it's outside and McCoy keeps complaining about it, the prank at the end... all of it!

and yay, extra point for possessiveness in the last line! \o/

that was fantastic, thank you so much ♥

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Re: Kirk/McCoy; Public Sex; R gottalovev April 23 2010, 21:11:03 UTC
I loved it!

it's only your second time? well you're definitely a natural!

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