FIVE ACTS MULTIFANDOM COMMENT-FIC-A-THON

Apr 18, 2010 19:36


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Vporn, Damon/Alaric, knifeplay, R janie_tangerine April 19 2010, 12:35:29 UTC
The more this goes on, the more Alaric thinks that he has to be out of his mind.

Because well, being in a bed with someone who has turned his wife into a vampire (albeit on her request, so he can’t exactly blame him, as much as he’d like to) and killed him once is insane enough, and Alaric probably wasn’t in his right frame of mind when he didn’t try to get away from the situation, but letting him to this, well, that’s totally insane.

It doesn’t mean that he’s trying to put a stop to it. Maybe it’s because Damon can’t really kill him if he wanted, that’s established; but still, as Damon moves that silver knife (Alaric’s silver knife, fuck) right along his throat (and he could slit right there in less than a second if the just flicked his wrist a bit), the blade becoming warm from the contact with his skin, he can’t help biting his tongue in order not to moan.

(He’s not giving Damon satisfaction so easily.)

The blade is sharp and thin and deadly, and Damon’s face halfway between unexpressive and satisfied as he moves it downwards, ripping Alaric’s shirt with a soft sound that sounds haunting when they’re surrounded by silence, except for their own breathing.

There’s something skillful in the way Damon handles that knife.

As the shirt falls off, a cool hand runs down his bare stomach and Alaric wishes this wasn’t making him so helpless. But if he moved he’d probably manage to gain a cut on his own and so he stays still.

“You know what would be fun?” Damon teases, the tip of the knife circling Alaric’s navel. “If you just let me have a taste. And don’t make that face, you know better to think that I’d try to turn you. It’d be…” he trails as the knife cuts Alaric’s briefs at the hip, “… against my better interests, anyway.”

“Fuck you,” Alaric answers, but for some reason he turns his head baring his throat.

No, not for some reason. It’s for the thrill. It’s for the way he felt his cock harden at the suggestion. Fuck Damon and the fact that sometimes Alaric wonders how she had felt when he turned her.

Not that he wants to turn.

But.

He still has thought about it more times than he’d have liked.

And he can’t even hide how hard he is.

The knife’s tip cuts just a bit and not even on his throat but rather in the hollow between his neck and his shoulder; Alaric can feel a small quantity of blood seep out and Damon’s eyes go dark as he leans down.

It’s the most dangerous position he’s ever been in, and suddenly he knows what to do. He lets Damon lick at his skin for a second, enough to make him slightly lose control, and then Alaric’s hand reaches Damon’s wrist and he takes the knife away in a smooth motion before turning on his left.

Now their positions are reversed and fuck, the way Damon’s eyebrow raises in sincere surprise is enough to give him another thrill that goes straight to his cock.

“What about this?” Alaric asks, letting the side of the blade run along Damon’s unnaturally pale cheek, and he’s glad he’s managing to keep his voice in check.

Damon raises the other eyebrow, standing perfectly still, and his whole body language screams challenge.

“I’m impressed. And oh, please, have your fucking way,” he purrs as his hips slightly, slightly grind against Alaric’s crotch.

Alaric can’t really say no to such an offer and he licks his lips as he brings his knife down and starts tracing random lines with the tip. He won’t cut, he doesn’t want to go there, he will never go there, but he has rarely felt so satisfied as he does in the moment he brings the knife near Damon’s throat and he shivers without being able to control it.

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Re: Vporn, Damon/Alaric, knifeplay, R gottalovev April 19 2010, 12:59:54 UTC
ohhhh! okay, so I had a feeling that it was the one that had caught your eye! lol! and I've never been so glad to be right!

*dances*

this is AWESOME. I love how Alaric questions his sanity but still goes for it, although he fights showing how much it affects him. How Damon is toying with Alaric, in a perfect, perfect Damon way.

but what MAKES this is the flipping and role reversal! HOTNESS! OMG! it would totally make Damon crazy. and that last line is just flail inducing.

thank you so much babe, this is exactly what I hoped for!

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Re: Vporn, Damon/Alaric, knifeplay, R janie_tangerine April 19 2010, 13:59:42 UTC
Heee, thank you! As soon as I saw that prompt I was like NO I NEED TO BE ON THAT LIKE NOW, lol. I'm so glad you liked it, and that you liked the characterization! They're fun, I have to say. And I couldn't help the role reversal, it just wanted to go like that. ;) ;) Thanks again!!!!!!!!! :D

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Re: Vporn, Damon/Alaric, knifeplay, R streussal April 21 2010, 05:37:14 UTC
...this is really good.

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Re: Vporn, Damon/Alaric, knifeplay, R janie_tangerine April 21 2010, 07:29:17 UTC
Eee, thank you! ;) I love those two. I do. Much glad you liked it!

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Re: Vporn, Damon/Alaric, knifeplay, R tokenblkgirl April 22 2010, 04:12:53 UTC
Good lord, this is amazing. Sexy, and I'm such a sucker for well written knife play. :)

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Re: Vporn, Damon/Alaric, knifeplay, R janie_tangerine April 24 2010, 17:53:01 UTC
Oh, thank you so much! Well, those two make hot easy, but much glad to know you liked it!! :D

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