Le Morte De Jim

[going_boldly]

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[going_boldly]

Ah, sorry. My French is pretty much non-existent. I'll go fix that.

[going_boldly]

*facepalm*

This is what I get for not checking to make sure the copy+paste went off right before logging off. Let me make the text normal colored, and fix the French.

(I'm glad you liked it anyway.)

[letmecrywolf]

While I fully support the French being corrected (although I think it already was) I do not think you should quail in the face of such egotistical criticism. Pretentiousness is an entirely relative term and not one that can be doled out by a single person. Also, there are no solid rules for titles or themes or a lot of creative writing in general. It's all a matter of taste, and oftentimes the "rules" are convention more than anything else.

Don't let anyone push you around.

[syredronning]

I agree, very clever concept and quite believable. Thanks!

[greek_jester]

You tagged correctly. That was very creepy. It made the hair on the back of my neck stand up *shivers*

Really interesting idea, well executed.

[blcwriter]

Very interesting-- I'd really love if you teased this out a few hundred words more.