This is what I get for not checking to make sure the copy+paste went off right before logging off. Let me make the text normal colored, and fix the French.
While I fully support the French being corrected (although I think it already was) I do not think you should quail in the face of such egotistical criticism. Pretentiousness is an entirely relative term and not one that can be doled out by a single person. Also, there are no solid rules for titles or themes or a lot of creative writing in general. It's all a matter of taste, and oftentimes the "rules" are convention more than anything else.
Ok, I'm going to freeze this thread, for fear of it devolving. No offense is meant to either of you, and I do appreciate you both taking the time to leave feedback. I'd just rather not have an argument on my journal about this.
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This is what I get for not checking to make sure the copy+paste went off right before logging off. Let me make the text normal colored, and fix the French.
(I'm glad you liked it anyway.)
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Don't let anyone push you around.
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