Fic: The Square Root of Four [SJM RPS]

[glitterburn]

Title: The Square Root of Four
Fandom: Super Junior M RPS
Pairing: Sungmin/Eunhyuk
Rating: PG13
Summary: The secret’s out, everything’s broken, but love is worth fighting for.
Notes: Crossdressing!Sungmin. Counting Backwards, final part. Sequel to Two Plus Two Equals Five.

The Square Root of Four
You cheated on me. You fucking bitch.Sungmin

Comments

Extra-long review of squee!

[dislex1a]

So, uh. This is going to be semi-coherent, because that's about all I can manage at the moment

Re: Extra-long review of squee!

[glitterburn]

Thank you so much <3 I really was flailing so hard over this one and being quite Min-like in over-thinking it, when in the end it was fairly simple. I'm so glad all the themes and references to the rest of the series came out for you! And you credit me with one theme that was absolutely unintentional but serendipitous - the chaos/order binary. LOL I didn't even think of that but now I see that you're absolutely right! I is not always that clever, hey.

Hyukkie probably scarred everyone with his confessions

You just know Hyukkie was a bundle of incoherent emotion when they got back and so it was Fishy who blabbed everything! Probably with the help of diagrams. And Wookie would have that 'ohhh' look that he perfected in Taiwan, and Yesung would be all 'Whatever, I can wail louder', and Kyu is still in his room playing Starcraft.

SiHae is just going to be LOL!fluff, I'm sure of it XD

Re: Extra-long review of squee!

[dislex1a]

(Eee HoMin icon!)

You're plenty clever! <3

LMAO now I have an image of Kyu wandering out whilst Hyukkie is sniffing away and Fishy is trying to explain with his diagrams, looking at everyone, and then shrugging his shoulders and going back to his room. Because Starcraft is more important than Hyuk's lovelife. XD

*squees softly about SiHae*

[diagon]

I love it when you fill me with so much anticipation. When you write stories where I am literally scared to read the next line you know you have it made

[diagon]

***has to split reply again OMG!!

This must have been exhausting to write because each line had the potential to be loaded so heavily. I had my layout so I would only read a line and then move down to the next one because my anticipation was so high and it really paid off in some parts - this next section the line ended with But you don't want me, do you? and I was begging Min not to say anything else, but I had a feeling he would and spoil it - and he did.
Silence. It stretches, becomes painful. Sungmin doesn’t want to address the last point, but he can’t ignore it, either. His voice scratches him raw. “But you don’t want me, do you?

You'd set him up so well that I could taste just what he would say and of course how Hyukkie would respond because this was a point they were both hurting over so much.

I think the most painful thing for me to read was: Then you wouldn’t feel so rejected, and I-I wouldn’t feel so guilty.” Because it shows just how deep the friendship was even before Min confessed his love. That Hyuk felt guilty for

[diagon]

**Damns word limits

[glitterburn]

This must be the longest comment I've ever had LOL Thank you for finding so much to say and being more coherent about it than I can ever be in my daft replies. What makes sense in my head rarely transmutes into the comment box. Thank you for discussing this series with me over the past few months and not letting me sidle my way out of it.

Thank you - and now I really owe you a HenWook!
xxx

[mad_nux]

So much awesome in this chapter. I just can't gaaaah
Hyukmin asdfhhdssasgh /braindead Their talk put me in a whirl of emotions. I just wanna punch the both of them idek *_*

I love that there are emotions and insecurities in Min cross-dressing, it makes it more believable and intriguing. This be my fave crossdressing ficcy :3

So sad that this is the final part :c sequel or epilogue with Hyuk together with Min? /puppy eyes

[glitterburn]

Thank you for reading ^^ LOL I often wanted to punch them too!! I will write them again for sure XD

[glitterburn]

Thank you so much, you're so kind <3

[catherine_leite]

always wondering how those people can make a very lone awesome comment like that. :/ i'm such fail commenter. lol.....
so.
actually, the ending is unpredictable. first i really hated hyukjae for doing those things to sungmin and i really wanted him just to be with siwon. but then!
hyukjae was confused with himself.
and the cuddling part... i like this a lot, bb.

for real.

[glitterburn]

Thank you! You're not a fail commenter at all, I really appreciate you taking the time to let me know how you felt about the fic :D Yep, Hyukkie was just a big ball of confusion but they sorted it out in the end. Cuddling solves a lot of things! And Siwon and Donghae will be back in their own spin-off fic soon ^^

[catherine_leite]

ooooo... so it's a sihae????
:D

[glitterburn]

Yep! Donghae is so *curious* about Siwon sleeping with Sungmin ;)